I'm so fucking magical.

Ummm....
Me thinks this is a bit over the Pg 13 rated level.
>_____<;
Graphic/explicit word choice from the second paragraph on.

ur banned
sorry for posting mods

I guess. Sorry.

You could edit it down to just the first paragraph and take away what's in the parenthesis and leave it open. Or edit it away completlely and ask for it to be locked.

you guess? i lol'd.

i thought u did it to get banned

I'm not going to bind myself to restrictions in poetry just because some shitty website tells me it's too graphic. Welcome to the world of writing.

*Claps.*
Although you probably already know this.. well written, honestly.

Life is graphic; keeping "bad words" out of one website isn't gonna stop much of anything.

But yeah, those are the rules, so whatever.
Great prose, man, either way.

then i guess u cant follow basic rules
in
gaiaonline.com u can do this though

lmao azu, i love "poets" with "attitude"


makes the world seem more emo to me.


it's a good laugh.


this sight, last time i checked, is for teens. or kids around age 13.


that means, if this "sh*tty" website makes it to where you shouldn't post pg13+ stuff here, it usually means you shouldn't post things like this here.

it's really that simple.


if you have a problem, go somewhere else.

kthnx.

This is more of a prose poem. I don't really care much for elementary rules. If you want to restrict yourself to mediocrity, than that's your choice.

Now unless you are going to spam and break the rules yourself, please enlighten me with a real critique or get the fuck out. Thanks.

plz stop it

Hope you all got to see my poetry. If you wanna see again or more Pm me.

thats better now

Hahahahaha. I'm not all sexual now. I bind myself with all aspects behind poetry with my style.

Edit: I'm tired now. I will know if someone plagiarizes.

Originally Posted by Azulon

This is more of a prose poem. I don't really care much for elementary rules. If you want to restrict yourself to mediocrity, than that's your choice.

Now unless you are going to spam and break the rules yourself, please enlighten me with a real critique or get the fuck out. Thanks.

oh boy!

so mature.

here's some critique:

i hate the way you use profane methods of prose, but your second one was actually quite amazing.

see? you didn't lose anything by me doing that, i just critiqued you. so here i am.

edit: your third one is even more amazing!

it seems like lyrics to a really good song that gets stuck in my head because of the lyrics only and not the music.

Oh then you and I have much more to discuss. Allow me to be your friend and I'll pm you more of my poetry, should you like to see more.

Edit: My tushie hurts

IT feels fun to hold the copyright to poetry and share it with others. I hope you enjoyed my craptacular works.

Ok. I'd like for this thread to be locked. Personal reasons as to why I did the graphic poem on purpose. I don't trust the internet that much so please look at the poetry while you can before I take it all down.