Hey! I'm Tetsu. I'm not really much of a poet but I have a few here or there mostly from my writing class. I'm not really looking for critique, but if you feel there's things that would make any of my poems better, feel free to tell me! ^__^ I won't bite.

I honestly don't consider my work good, but I'm biased against my work xD

Please if you crit, give me constructive critiques. I will most likely ignore you if you tell me I suck and should never write again or something xD Seriously.

I will warn that some of my poetry has a morbid tendency. I'm not 'emo' but I have a morbid fascination with death and blood, thus I incorporate it--though I don't know if I'll post that side of me too much hahah!

Also, thanks for reading and stopping by and all that stuff! :3

Warning: Death

Mortal's Wrath

His body arched
And he gave a cry
The night was over
But he'd never die

This had to be a joke
The gun still hot
His blood pooled around
But fearful he was not

A tear streaked his face
The angel's fair skin was oh so pale
He grit his teeth and tried to hold on
It was too late, his life was stale

Already expired
But he gave a smile
A glow engulfed him
And he whispered "I'll be gone a while"

So there he stood
His expression dead
And that sweet little angel turned to dust
He would always remember what he said

A tear streaked his face
And his smirk turned rigid
As his cigarette burned
That church felt frigid

Then he dropped it
And he smashed it into the ground
Standing in that holy doorway
Not once did he frown

He held that holy crown
Forced it above his head
Nightmare's wings sprout out
Joseph was forever dead

That sweet little boy
His mother had forsaken
A plea with the Devil
Had he now taken

Death to all angels
His unearthly sin
All to revenge
A life that could have never been

Now the sun rose
His unearthly look vanished
He looked to the Heavens
And he knew he was banished

His lips curved to grin
And he twirled his gun
It had been a long time
But boy was it fun

He stepped out slowly
And all he could say
In a gentle low voice
was "Nice Day"

WAKE

"Until we meet again," she said,
"Until we meet again."
Once Death does us part,
Only then will Chaos start.
Angels cry and Angels scream,
Only in a Child's Dream.
The scent of Blood, of burning Flesh,
Young Demon Lords do their best.
Swords of Power, Beings of Strength,
All to see here at our Wake.

WAKE +Sonnet Version+

Hear Heaven's Angels' bloody cries and screams

Now, upon the Dawn that Death does us part

Heard only within all our Childrens' dreams

We'll summon the Twilight of Chaos, Start!

The sweet scent of Blood, of your burning Flesh

Nightmare's young Demon Lords shall do their best

A God's Sword of Power and Beings of Strength

For and Endless Waltz of such epic length

Utter to her small words of Crimson Mist

Now, start Pure, the Eternal Dance of Two

Take the risk with a vow, I do insist

For Purity, speak clearly: I LOVE YOU

Down pour, a flood of blood, now you're the Fake

I shall see you on the Dawn of your WAKE

Tears

This soft, burning liguid
Streaks down my face.
My hand reaches to wipe it away,
And it crystalizes.
Time has stopped,
And the crystals break away.
Everyone around me is frozen,
And I never do realize
How precious they are to me
Until everything begins to crumble,
And I lose everyone
For eternity.

Bottomless Pit

Slowly the floor leaves me
An empty darkness below
Oh bottomless pit, beyond the eye can see
Why do you claim me so?

Gingerly its embrace engulfs me
Warming me from head to toe
Oh bottomless pit, am I free
From my friend who is my foe?

Dear bottomless pit, please tell me
The reason you keep me here
Do you think I will no longer be
Is my fall what you fear?

Well, my love, it's too late to stop me
My dark demise is already set
For now I realize my freedom's key
Is somewhere before we met

So dear bottomless pit, let me crash
Let me die; be buried deep
Before your birthday bash
For me, will you weep?

Goodbye my love, my deadly bird
The bottomless pit is where I lie
Forever and a day

Note: Bottomless Pit was actually published in an anthology this past December :3 *joy*