Heavenly Prayer


I Am Your Closest Friend, Your Closest Partner, Your Closest Admirer, How Can You Live Without Me? I Am The Air Around You. The Only Way To Loose Yourself And Me Is To Not Breathe. Only Then Will I Come For You, In Love And In Heaven.

I'll move this to the poetry sub-forum where it belongs.

cool poem

It really doesn't read like a poem to me. It seems more like prose. It's nice but I'd try to give it a bit more rhythm.

hmmmm.... it's cool, but 'um... dunno it's like something it's missing but i can't tell you what

Its short,
its simple but I do like it as the
words seem to have meaning. Even though
I don't pray as such because I'm not religious
I can see how these words may give comfort on
a level.