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Old 03-05-2008, 06:33 AM

I wrote this when my last relationship of 4 years went..well, very badly.

I will not go quietly,
to suffer in silence.
I will not lay myself down,
and pay homage with my tears.
I will not break.
I will not cry out.
I will simply pretend
you never touched me.
~Leanne

I thought I'd add some more..

This is not my heart
that aches in my chest.
These are not my eyes
that pour forth a ocean of tears.
This is not my body
that betrays me with it's awful need.
There has to be a terrible mistake I say.
This is not my world that has shattered.
~Leanne


I say,
Heart, remember you loved him.
Arms, remember you held him.
Legs, remember you ran to him.
Hands, remember you caressed him.
Lips, remember you kissed him,
so softly,
and finally,
goodbye.
I must remember so that I will
turn my eyes away when I grow cold.
I will not hate him.
~Leanne


I close my eyes and try to hide,
don't believe what you see.
Everything here is only lies.
In the dark
I am reaching.
In the dark
I am crawling.
No reason to cry...
I taste your touch,
your finger-tips are cold as ice.
In my heart I hear the sound,
Goodbye....goodbye....goodbye.....
In the dark
I am reaching.
In the dark
I am crawling.
No reason to cry..
I won't cry...
~Leanne

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Old 03-05-2008, 08:43 AM

That's a very nice poem. I wish I had some talent and could actually write something that sounds good!

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Old 03-05-2008, 11:30 AM

That's beautiful! I wish I could write poetry!

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Old 03-06-2008, 03:58 AM

thanks...I haven't had time to write for a while though.

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Old 03-07-2008, 02:14 AM

nice poem. i have a poem kinda like that one called PAIN. you might like it

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Old 03-08-2008, 10:48 PM

added some more writings...next time I'll post some happier ones :wink:

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Old 03-09-2008, 02:17 PM

Aww that so said though...
But I had the same feeling when my last relationship went bad..
Such a good work..
I like it. x3

Kotoko.

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Old 03-10-2008, 05:51 PM

One of my Favorite quotes is..

Love is like racing across the frozen tundra on a snowmobile which flips over, trapping you underneath. At night, the ice-weasels come. ~Matt Groening

 


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