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Old 03-15-2008, 04:28 AM

I wanna post a few of my poems here. please do not steal my work. I work hard on my poems.


-I will Be there-

When Your feeling Low.
When your feeling sad.
When your feeling Lonely.
Just put your hand on your heart.
And Know I'll be there.
Just know when ever your feeling down.
Im just a call away.
Im never to far from you.
I will Always be there.
When the sun goes down.
When the moon comes up.
Look at the stars and smile
Know Im always there.
When the moon goes away
and the sun comes up.
Listen to the sounds around you.
When Your feeling Low.
When your feeling sad.
Just Know I will be there...

~My Love For You~

I love you. Your my forever love.
Nothing will change that. Nothing can stop me from loving you.
I know your wondering why I love you. so thats why Im writing this.
I love you because your you. I love you because you make me laugh.
I love you because your always there for me.
I love you because you love me for me.
I love you even tho we fight sometimes.
But even tho those little fights we have are nothing to me.
I will never stop loving you. Your everything I dreamed of.
Your my one and only. We've gone so far.
I love you because since day one you've been there for me.
Threw good times and bad we will always be there for eachother.
There may be some things we both dont like about what we do.
but that really doesnt matter.
All that matters is the both of us love eachother for who we are.
and nothing else. I know we will be together a life time.
No if's Ands Or Buts. I will always love you. No matter what.



~No Good Bye~

You have tooken my heart and put it in your hands
. Ive Told you never to breake it.
You held it in one hand and tore it into peaces.
I screamed in pain. And wondering how you could do a think like that.
Thinking you loved me. Thinking I was wrong.
I walk away as tears run down my face again.
I walk around all I could do was think.
My body goes cold. My mund goes blank
. I fall to my knees I strugle in pain
. My eyes start to close. wondering why this is happning.
I scream for your help. There is no call back. I wait for a bit.
Them I scream again. My eyes close my body goes cold.
I lay there feeling nothing. I faid out of life...with no good bye.


~Fear~

Fear is in side every one.
They cant stop it. They cant controle it
You may see something you like..
But once you see it face to face.
You get scared..and feel like your not ment to be.
It looks you in the eye. telling you what to do.
When your scared..You feel someone else is controling you.
You have a nice part of you then an evil part.
Like Love and hate.

My evil side..her name is Mandy.
Mandy gets out of my body.
She starts cussing..hiting..
Maybe even yelling.
but Mandy also has feelings.
Every time someone yells at her.
Tears run down her face.
She wants to be different.
Wants to be nice.
But no one cares for her.

The part of me that is nice.
You all should know by now.
I smile. I laugh. I some times cry.
But I try to keep happy.
I try not to let Mandy out.
If I do. Please try to be nice.
She does you no harm.
Just wants friends.
Her heart has been broken.
It is not me..
Her soul is in side me..
There are two of me.
Many can not live again.
So Her soul lives in side me.
Her death was not like the others.


She wanted to stay alive.
but the love of her life..
Died long ago.
She said to her self
That she cant live with out.
So she killed her self...not wanting to be alive..
Her soul lives in side me..so watch out...
You have been warned..


That Is what I will post now. I will post more later.
you may comment my work and what not. Please do not steal It.


-untitled-
My love for you grows each day.
every time we talk Im so happy.
To know your there for me when ever I need you.
You dont know how happy that makes me.
I love you and I never want to leave you.
So please. Promise me you will stay with me forever.
Promise you will try. I will be there for you when you need me. My love for you will never end.
It just grows each day. Every time we talk and I here your voice My heart beats fast. And when I close my eyes at night and dream. I dream of the day we meet face to face. I dream of our first kiss.
I love you..So never let me go.

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Old 03-15-2008, 05:41 AM

Your poems were interesting. I especially like "My Love For You".

You're really good at displaying emotions through your writing.

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Old 03-15-2008, 07:34 AM

Thank you. Those are some old poems. I should have some new ones up here soon hopefully.

I put alot of thoughts and feelings In my poems. Ive been writing poems since I was thirteen years old so yea. thank you for the comment.

 


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