a but of poetry that I made in 6th grade. It is kinda disjointed because we had to follow a rubric, but I still like it. It had color on the originol copy, but I am too lazy to put color on it here. (it takes too long)



I Am
I am poetic and imaginative
I wonder when I will die
I hear the ocean crashing
I see a lime-green sky
I want chocolate
I am poetic and imaginative

I pretend that I am a star
I feel that dreams are fragments of thoughts
I touch my Grammy award
I worry that my family won’t stay with me
I cry for those who suffer
I am poetic and imaginative

I understand that you have to roll with the punches
I say go with the flow
I dream to become famous
I try to achieve my goals
I hope to succeed
I am poetic and imaginative


“Our life is what our thoughts make it.�
-Marcus Aurelius Antonius

oh man. this one is just weird. I don't even remember writing it. It was probably in 3rd grade or something. I was just looking through my documents and found it in here. I couldn't stop laughing.


I Can Be Many Things Drug Free


I can be many things drug free.
I can be anything I want to be!
I can be anything, anything, see, see, see.
Saying no is the key for me!
I could grow healthy like a tree.
I like me cause I am drug free!

Lol!! Yeah weird, but nice~
Of course you can be healthy like a tree, that if you keep yourself DRUG-FREE! ^_^

PS: Lets hope we all remember that when we are 16-17 xD!! No offense to anyone okay? ;)

hahahahaha this is adoreable! lol keep up the good work hun.

Lol! How cute! XD

I like the idea, and the flow of the poem but a few lines threw me off becasue of their length compaired to the rest of the short lines.

I feel that dreams are fragments of thoughts

Such as this one. Unless these lines are really important to the poem and you want them to stand out as they do I would sugest shortening them.

I understand that you have to roll with the punches

This one as well.

Instead of having, I am poetic and imaginative repeat only in the first stanza I think it would be really cool if you repeated it it at the begining or end of each.

PRetty good all around work though. :D

Well, for being a poem that had a set pattern, it came out really well. For some reason I really liked the line "I see a lime-green sky". It made me think of someone licking a cloud that tastes like lime jell-o. [Yeah, I know, Doesn't make sense.]

that's a wonderful inspiring poem. i hope you are drug free.

I merged your poetry threads together. ^^ As per the poetry subforum's rules, please use just one thread for your poetry.