For my first Poem:

and yes all poems are copyrighted to me, ashie-chan

Feel No Pain

When i do this
It doesn't hurt
No pain to feel
No tears to fall

Sliding it across my skin
It doesn't hurt
Watching my blood flow
It doesn't hurt

The only time it hurts
Is when I realize what I did
Knowing that I failed
Only then will my tears fall

My tears they mix
With the water falling on me
My naked form weak and bloody
I sit there wanting to drown

But I realize I must get up
Cleaning myself off
I keep saying "I'm sorry"
Though who I'm saying it to


I have no clue.....


What you've become

What about today?
Look at who you are now,
What about tomorrow?
Who will you be then?

What about last month?
When your hair was perfectly long and red,
What about this week?
Now look at how it's short and ruined,

What about last year?
You were so happy.....so giddy,
What about these the present?
You cry almost evry night,

What about today?
Look at who you are now,
What about tomorrow?
Who will you be then?

very powerful words. Extremely sad.

thank you!~

yea my poems always end up being very very sad..but im not sure why...

oh kitten thats so sad
I can relate, have been
there myself. I hope you
move past this stage though.
Your poetry is very strong,
very real

wow. amazing :) nice job, it's sad but inspirational in a way.

i love it...
i really think it's a good poem...
the words you use are strong and touching...
i would rate you.... 9.5 i guess :P

It's pretty sad :(
I like them