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Stay a little wont ya?
Well im not really good at writing poems or short stuff, I cant really find all the right words, please tell me if you see something wrong :)
new ones will NOW be added to the top _____________________________ 2011 Aug 7. Where have all my emotions gone, buried so deep under I can’t revive the tears I want to cry, trying to be sad is to much of a challenge. I will take my everything and put it aside to feel a slight sorrow, My heart trembles as the cage rumbles, my body shakes from the thought of emotional pain. I am human this is normal, Sometimes you have to let go of that Happiness you hold so dear and close to understand there is much more than that. I have locked that away scared of the sadness scared of how much the tears will really hurt, because I’m the only one here holding my self up alone. _____________________________ As we fall in the right places we look back at the shit we did the crap we put our self threw but if it happened any differently, I don’t think I would have known you so who needs time when we are together let it fly as we are still here, not yet to let go. If we end up separate ways, I can say in confidence that you being part of my life had brought me farther than I ever been. ________ Take my soul, and combine it with yours. Let us feel a real connection; for I’m alone, so alone. My heart is burried under the pain of rejection. And when blinded hate will come, as I will be angered by the lies I once believed. ______________________________ Older than 2011 Should I be jealous, Should I be caution, Will you hurt me if I'm not, Will I become blind of what I see in front of my eyes, Would you take advantage of this, Would i even care, How do I know I'm the only one, How do you know you're the only one, All there is hope. _____________________________ 2009 nov 12 I know for a Fact we're Not going to be Forever. I know we have to let go at a point of life, Setting each other Free. It's not always going to be us, I'm not always going to be in your arms, but forever ill love you no matter were you are, no matter who your with. Tears roll down my eyes, I thought you were the one. What if you fall more in love With That somebody else. I'll Always Think of you, even if Somebody comes along. You will always stay in my Heart, no matter how much i love that somebody else. _______________________________________________ THE POEMS BELOW ARE OLDER .................................................. ..................... He looks in my eyes he says i love you i say i love you back,not sure if i mean it.he says he wants to spent the rest of his life with me, i just look in to his eyes and smile and kiss him on the head, he is quiet he doesn't have much to say though i know what he is thinking so i like to think, i love the way he looks at me like im the only one there,my heart raising when im at his door step waiting for him to open the door and hug me, i get butterfly's in my stomach wondering if i should break up with him, thinking he is to immature for me wondering if he will respect me the way i want thinking he is to fast for me wondering if he really loves me. .................................................. ................ the sky darkens as the day goes by a part of me dies with it,i close my eyes knowing what i have wont last forever i hold it in my arms, as its warm lips kiss mine, i open my eyes no one or nothing in front of me just me looking at the sun go down, im lonely for now that is im bored and im scared, i want this to go away, don't know what will happen next, happening right in front of my eyes though i don't have much control,most people around me walk passed like im not there, not knowing the pain i am, trying to cover it up with a fake smile on my face, waiting for days to pass by, trying to find happiness in the world. .................................................. .............. my life goes on as i, me as one they in pairs, not knowing what pain they will store up in the further, nothing goes as plan, there are consiqensis all the time, not know what they are you just live on, in till something goes terribly wrong, not knowing what to do you ignore it, going on with your life hiding from your fears. |
life is dark and cold and you cant do nothing
to help, the people around you, you care for die all the time, u just sit there and watch knowing u cant help, but you know in some way you just feel like you can but you ignore that and go on with the cold and dark life you already own. ....................................... candy is sweet like the smell of flowers. you pop it in your mouth letting it dissolve on its self so the flavor last, yummy. one by one the candy is gone waiting for next time for a trip to the candy store to see what other outrages flavors there is, so many choices, so little time, getting a friend to chose so you can have a surprise! ............................... im not good with rhyming poems :D ................................. the clock it ticking, time going slow, not knowing what to do, you put your socks on, picking the pair of shoes your going to wear today. goes out the door shutting it behind you, walking to the ice cream shop to get your favorite ice cream, licking the cold ice cream, sending a cold shiver down your spine thinking what you will do next, looking at your gold watch. walking down the road back to your home. |
my poems
pome:day after today:
i sit in the corner. lights off, the light from the moon shines in, i wounder what ever happened to the pain i forgotten because all i have on my face is a smile, no matter how hard it gets no regrets, things go on and so should i. laugh about the good times laugh about that one guy you cried about because all of that is over and it will only get better from here. Pome:Make your own fun? i dont think: Go ahead and lie, Lie to the one i care for lie and make them feel bad just so you can laugh, maybe then when u find out you hurt him maybe you will feel bad Because i know i do And i want to tell him, i just cant tell him when your there making me lie to him just as you are. can you tell? my fake laughing from my real. Guilt running trough my body The truth wanting to scream out For now ill just leave it Hoping it will fix by itself. Pome: cant stop thinking of you, I blush when people tell me i like you. Trying to ingnore the fact I Rarely get to talk to you. but when i do my feelings just gets stronger. Trying to ingnore Maybe you dont like me, Telling my self its ok if you dont. maybe if i keep tricking my self Ill break my own heart. |
Trust
I Moved this To the Top because Every one reads that First.
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draikou, I've merged all of your poetry threads together. In the Poetry sub, we ask that you create just one thread and update it with all your new pieces.
Always remember to read through the forum rules before posting. :yes: |
Firstly, what sort of poetry are you writing? Free style verse, or maybe simply something that plays off of the flow of words, like blank verse? The amazing thing about poetry is that it is “free”. Though a person can do rhyming, there are also things like the Japanese Haiku that have nothing to do with words sounding alike. ^^ So just keep writing! Currently, your poetry seems “unpolished”, so the more you write the more it’ll become “polished” as you grow comfortable with your own writing. =) If you’re curious to explore other types of poetry to try writing that, then I know a site you can go to that would help. =) |
I dont necisarily like free verse poetry, I've always liked it to rhyme, but I think that you are really good at relaying emotions in what you write. I only read a few of what is in here, and they look really good. In your third poem, you spelled consequence wrong, but thats only a spelling error, and you can tell what it is.
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aww they are so good you are especially good at love poetry n_n XD =D
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good job :sarcasm:
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added New Poem on Nov 12 :] and thx haha
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Added a couple new ones. :) i kinda stooped doing stuff like this for awhile.
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