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draikou
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03-30-2008, 05:07 AM
Well im not really good at writing poems or short stuff, I cant really find all the right words, please tell me if you see something wrong :)
new ones will NOW be added to the top
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2011 Aug 7.
Where have all my emotions gone, buried so deep under I can’t revive the tears I want to cry, trying to be sad is to much of a challenge. I will take my everything and put it aside to feel a slight sorrow, My heart trembles as the cage rumbles, my body shakes from the thought of emotional pain. I am human this is normal, Sometimes you have to let go of that Happiness you hold so dear and close to understand there is much more than that. I have locked that away scared of the sadness scared of how much the tears will really hurt, because I’m the only one here holding my self up alone.
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As we fall in the right places
we look back at the shit we did
the crap we put our self threw
but if it happened any differently, I don’t think I would have known you
so who needs time when we are together
let it fly as we are still here, not yet to let go.
If we end up separate ways, I can say in confidence that you being part of my life had brought me farther than I ever been.
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Take my soul, and combine it with yours. Let us feel a real connection; for I’m alone, so alone. My heart is burried under the pain of rejection. And when blinded hate will come, as I will be angered by the lies I once believed.
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Older than 2011
Should I be jealous,
Should I be caution,
Will you hurt me if I'm not,
Will I become blind of what I see in front of my eyes,
Would you take advantage of this,
Would i even care,
How do I know I'm the only one,
How do you know you're the only one,
All there is hope.
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2009 nov 12
I know for a Fact we're Not going to be Forever.
I know we have to let go at a point of life,
Setting each other Free.
It's not always going to be us,
I'm not always going to be in your arms,
but forever ill love you
no matter were you are,
no matter who your with.
Tears roll down my eyes,
I thought you were the one.
What if you fall more in love With That somebody else.
I'll Always Think of you,
even if Somebody comes along.
You will always stay in my Heart,
no matter how much i love that somebody else.
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THE POEMS BELOW ARE OLDER
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He looks in my eyes he says i love you
i say i love you back,not sure
if i mean it.he says he wants to spent
the rest of his life with me, i just
look in to his eyes and smile and kiss
him on the head, he is quiet he doesn't
have much to say though i know what he
is thinking so i like to think, i love
the way he looks at me like im the only
one there,my heart raising when im at his
door step waiting for him to open the door
and hug me, i get butterfly's in my stomach
wondering if i should break up with him,
thinking he is to immature for me
wondering if he will respect me the way i want
thinking he is to fast for me
wondering if he really loves me.
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the sky darkens as the day goes by
a part of me dies with it,i close my eyes
knowing what i have wont last forever
i hold it in my arms, as its warm
lips kiss mine, i open my eyes
no one or nothing in front of
me just me looking at the sun go
down, im lonely for now that is
im bored and im scared, i want
this to go away, don't know what
will happen next, happening right
in front of my eyes though i don't
have much control,most people around
me walk passed like im not there,
not knowing the pain i am, trying
to cover it up with a fake smile on my
face, waiting for days to pass by,
trying to find happiness in the world.
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my life goes on as i, me as one
they in pairs, not knowing what
pain they will store up in the further,
nothing goes as plan, there are consiqensis
all the time, not know what they are
you just live on, in till something
goes terribly wrong, not knowing what
to do you ignore it, going on with your
life hiding from your fears.
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draikou
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03-30-2008, 05:32 AM
life is dark and cold and you cant do nothing
to help, the people around you, you care for
die all the time, u just sit there and watch
knowing u cant help, but you know
in some way you just feel like you can
but you ignore that and go on with the
cold and dark life you already own.
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candy is sweet like the smell of flowers.
you pop it in your mouth letting it
dissolve on its self so the flavor
last, yummy. one by one the candy
is gone waiting for next time for a
trip to the candy store to see
what other outrages flavors there
is, so many choices, so little time,
getting a friend to chose so you
can have a surprise!
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im not good with rhyming poems :D
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the clock it ticking,
time going slow, not knowing
what to do, you put your socks on,
picking the pair of shoes your going
to wear today. goes out the door
shutting it behind you, walking to
the ice cream shop to get your favorite
ice cream, licking the cold ice cream,
sending a cold shiver down your spine
thinking what you will do next, looking
at your gold watch. walking down the road
back to your home.
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draikou
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08-24-2008, 04:03 AM
pome:day after today:
i sit in the corner. lights off, the light from
the moon shines in, i wounder what ever
happened to the pain i forgotten because
all i have on my face is a smile, no matter
how hard it gets no regrets, things go on and
so should i. laugh about the good times laugh
about that one guy you cried about because all
of that is over and it will only get better from here.
Pome:Make your own fun? i dont think:
Go ahead and lie, Lie to the one i care for
lie and make them feel bad just so
you can laugh, maybe then when u find out
you hurt him maybe you will feel bad
Because i know i do And i want to tell
him, i just cant tell him when your there
making me lie to him just as you are.
can you tell? my fake laughing from
my real. Guilt running trough my body
The truth wanting to scream out
For now ill just leave it
Hoping it will fix by itself.
Pome:
cant stop thinking of you, I blush when people
tell me i like you. Trying to ingnore the fact I
Rarely get to talk to you. but when i do my feelings
just gets stronger. Trying to ingnore Maybe you dont
like me, Telling my self its ok if you dont.
maybe if i keep tricking my self Ill break my own heart.
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draikou
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08-27-2009, 09:50 PM
I Moved this To the Top because Every one reads that First.
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Knerd
I put the K in "Misspelling"
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08-27-2009, 11:24 PM
draikou, I've merged all of your poetry threads together. In the Poetry sub, we ask that you create just one thread and update it with all your new pieces.
Always remember to read through the forum rules before posting. :yes:
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Soul Searcher
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08-28-2009, 12:10 AM
Firstly, what sort of poetry are you writing? Free style verse, or maybe simply something that plays off of the flow of words, like blank verse? The amazing thing about poetry is that it is “free”. Though a person can do rhyming, there are also things like the Japanese Haiku that have nothing to do with words sounding alike. ^^ So just keep writing! Currently, your poetry seems “unpolished”, so the more you write the more it’ll become “polished” as you grow comfortable with your own writing. =)
If you’re curious to explore other types of poetry to try writing that, then I know a site you can go to that would help. =)
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Soriku The Ookami
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09-16-2009, 02:09 PM
I dont necisarily like free verse poetry, I've always liked it to rhyme, but I think that you are really good at relaying emotions in what you write. I only read a few of what is in here, and they look really good. In your third poem, you spelled consequence wrong, but thats only a spelling error, and you can tell what it is.
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09-17-2009, 01:02 AM
aww they are so good you are especially good at love poetry n_n XD =D
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cranky casey
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09-20-2009, 09:31 PM
good job :sarcasm:
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draikou
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11-24-2009, 10:30 PM
added New Poem on Nov 12 :] and thx haha
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draikou
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08-07-2011, 12:30 PM
Added a couple new ones. :) i kinda stooped doing stuff like this for awhile.
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