can you let me know what you think and maybe if I have any talent at all?

Forget Him

Forget his name, Forget his face
Forget his kiss his warm embrace
Forget the way he held you tight
Remember he's with her tonight

Forget the way he used to walk
Forget the way he used to talk
Forget how close you two once were
Remember he has chosen her

Forget the love you two once shared
Forget how much you truelly cared
Forget those things you used to do
Remember he's replaced you.

Forget the way you feel alone
Forget the life you once had known
Forget the pain, Forget the tears
Remember all the loving years

Forget you lived to be his wife
Forget you gave most of your life
Forget he said he'd leave you never
REMEMBER your better now then you were EVER


Choices

The choices we make in our loves are our own.
Do we make them with knowledge or just desire?
Do you chose to live or be led?
What choices you make turn to ice or to fire.

Do you chose to be steady
Or do you chose to fly free?
Will your life become stable
like you hoped it would be?

Those choices you make
when you are leading your Life
will you help your friends mend
or be the one to cut with the knife?

Do what you will
Make the choices yourself
but always remember
Friends are worth more then your wealth

Once apon a time
you were given a chance
To leave the hell you called home
and and not give it a glance

but you chose to throw it away
for the Love you held Dear
someday you will see
all those choices so clear

The friendships that you left behind
broken, tatered and torn
The friends who you left, standing all alone
All the hearts that were broken that you didnt warn


You cant reverse choices
that you make along the way
you must live with them
each and every day


So make your choices
each and every day
knowing your friends
could have helped guide the way

Stop chosing to leave them
all broken hearted and used
they helped you escape
the life you had full of abuse.

They chose to be there
thru the good and the bad
Holding your hand and your heart
Helping you to not be so sad.

You can fix the present
and the future if you so chose
but if you keep treating them poorly
it will be you that will lose.

You didn't even write the first one. I've seen it elsewhere before.
So yes, you have talent, you're quite good at plagiarism.
Which is illegal, by the way.

Originally Posted by KawaiiKasu

You didn't even write the first one. I've seen it elsewhere before.
So yes, you have talent, you're quite good at plagiarism.
Which is illegal, by the way.

excuse me? I wrote that in high school a long long time ago. and yes I WROTE IT MYSELF

so if someone else is coping me then theya re stealing

and if you saw it elsewhere posted it may be me posting it to get feedback. but dont you dare accuse me of not writing it.

Here is another one :)

The Smile

The day had past with nothing but gray skys
One day leading to the next
Nothing of color just grayness
and the sign of tears in her eyes

The sun came out
after a long dreary day
to shine on her sadness
and to take it away

It was you who brought back
That smile upon her face
You who have shown her
Her true love, Her true place

So Cherish that Smile
you brought back to her Face
Dont ever let it again become
that dark Gray lonely Space



A True Friendship

The day we met was emotional and stormy
not knowing life was about to swirl into a vortex
not knowing that what would come out of the eye
would be the sweetest reward of all

Looking back you can see something changed
Something that very moment the storm subsided
A ray of light began to show thru the dense clouds
A beem of precious purity, a New begining , a True Friendship

Life brings us very few true friends
the kind you can count on to keep your secrets
The kind who you trust with you life
The kind you too woudl lay down your life for

Once you find a true friend
Hold them with your might
Protect them and keep the safe
They are your future , your strength your Foundation

For without true friends
you are alone to roam this is true
but while you roam alone you realize
you have missed out on lifes most wonderful gift of all

A true Friendship