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Old 05-12-2008, 10:11 PM

A poem I wrote in English, I got an A on it.

Love and Loathing



Love is to open sky as loathing is to a pit in hell.

When love is new it’s fragile, when it’s aged it’s strong.

When loathing is new it’s burning in the soul, when it’s aged it cools off just a little.

New love, or old love,

It can change in a flash, lightning from the open sky,

Striking it down, sending it into the pits of hell.

Angels become demons, smiles laced with razor sharp teeth.

Claws to cut out a heart, watch the blood run.

Love of any kind can fade, wither and die.

Loathing left to fester in a dead heart or soul, burns and rots with a fiery acid.

A new soul, a new heart, a new love can stop the fire.

From the ashes of the broken, like a phoenix, a new love can bloom.

And the pits of hell shift and change, turning into the open skies once more.

Love is to open sky as loathing is to a pit in hell.

Both strong and weak, building and fading, growing and withering.

Teh Jeebus
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Old 05-18-2008, 02:50 AM

Oh my god. o w o That was great. It is no suprise that you got an A on it.

 



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