I have some old poem. Tell me what you think.

Love is for Life
Love is just a part of us that goes deeper than your soul --
your eyes glow when you see the one you love.
It’s like a melody that goes on for a long time in your heart --
your heart will pound like someone hitting a drum.
Your mouth will pour out sonnets and poems of how much you adore them --
their red lips kiss your words and play songs for you --
songs that last you a long time to sing.
See to it that you hear it all --
your pail skin will turn pink when they are done.
Give them a star with a rainbow that floats along their hair --
brush away the sad hair in their head --
let it fall on the light green grass.
Watch your lover's eyes dance the night away --
let the sun pour down on them --
spin around in their sweetened loveliness.
Let the leaves fall and dance around you --
they are blown by the whispers of the wind and fly past you.
Lift the vale that hides you away --
cover up your sadness and let it go away.
Time will fly by and it will be like it didn’t happen.
Keep the moment in mind.

Another poem. :angel:

I’m in Heaven
I wish to dream of daisies in a meadow and see blue skies that light rainbows of colors
As the blinding sun goes down into another miracle land where we have gone too many times.
This dream has no gruesome wars or villains who hurt you with cold knives
or guns with bullets of midnight death packed in them.
There is no grassy green money or coins of shining greed that lie in this world of charms.
No one grows old or dies in my fantasy world of gorgeous love.
It’s like I’m in heaven and I have no hatred left for the grim world I left,
but what joyous person misses me the most
and is there a pure soul thinking of the wonderful things
I have given to a world swollen with pain?