
07-07-2008, 01:07 AM
Wow... sounds like whatever the poem is about is like... a demon cat... and the poem does sound really creepy and suspenseful xD but I liked it, though I would have loved if there was more XD.
Advice (in case you wanted any, it's in white in case you don't ^^"): I'd just recommend cleaning up the lengths a little. It's really long on some parts but really small on others.
Great poem though ^_^
Last edited by The Wandering Poet; 07-07-2008 at 01:10 AM..
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