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iTwisted 07-06-2008 02:42 PM

Some Poems...
 
I've been writing poems for a long time... but I cant seem to find my stash of poems in my room. but whats weird... I havn't gotten better at writing poems at all D:
So maybe I'll post them another time.
But I have some poems that I've made up for Writing contests on "Flashbunny.com".
I won May's contest. I got a non-tradable item. A red quill pen.
Anyways... here they are:
TEA
Warm delight of golden tea
steam escaping free, into the air
Purple flowers surround it.
Painted by hand, onto the cup oh so careful.
you inhale the aroma,
and your cares melt away.
you mind starts to blur, in a good way
you feel... you feel... theres no words to describe it
the steam wraps around you in a blanket of warmth
just one sip...
FALLEN STAR
As i count the stars,
i notice something wrong.
I count again... Just to make sure.
But what I feared, my nightmare, became reality
a star had fallen!
Leaving a void in the heavens
as the angels cry and weep,
I hear a peep at my feet!
I look down to find a faintly glowing star
it had run away from home
as I cradle that star,
the sun arises.
And the star dissapears
ARTIC ADEVNTURE
Glimmering ice beneath your feet,
you see past the ice,
what to you see?
You see whales, fish, penguins and more.
what a delight.
never seen before.

Dive in the water,
swim freely with fish
so cold burr,
but I don't care!

beautiful sites to see
like a sunken ship,
or maybe a diver.
"Susan," mother calls me.
"Its time to come out of the snow!
And stop playing in the frozen lake!"
Thus an end to my arctic adventure.

fuyumi_saito 07-06-2008 05:38 PM

I like it, very original I think ^^

The tea one is my favorite.

iTwisted 07-06-2008 05:40 PM

Thanks.
That one is my favorite too C:

blackbunny 12-19-2008 10:24 PM

i love the tea one myself , this poem make me cry for some reason


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