First Thoughts on the subject; Mel Beeby? Who's This girl? What's it got to do with Death? It's In First person; Should be easy to Read.

Mel Beeby seems to be a Airheaded Dimwit. Did she look before Crossing the road?

Didn't Look like it. Later on in the Book though; Things get Intresting. Even if the Grammar is Constantly Changing, It's easy for the mind to work about this. You can picture Minor details about EVERY Character. It's Inspirational If I May say. I have nothing else to say for now, Bid thee Farewell.