| Aerinn |
08-07-2011 11:59 PM |
I found another word-by-word translation from an Italian forum (idk, it's in English though:
Quote:
Page 1:
Shima: AHH! What is that thing? The world apocalypse is here!
Shiemi: What is that thing?
Bon: (Unsure what 塞 means) It looks like it needs to be stop.
Page 2:
-People are commenting how hot it is and asking the ones coughing if they're okay.-
Bon's Mother: Could you help me pass out these anti-miasma masks to everyone? The miasma from the mountain is spreading quickly.
Helper: Yes, Of course!
Page 3:
Bon's Mother: I haven't seen Bon and them for a while, could I trouble you to check up on them?
Helper: I got it.
Bon's Mother: Tatsuma....
Bon: Alright! Start searching from this side
Followers: Okay~!
Bon: Don't penetrate too far into the underbrush.
-Flashback-
Call (think it's from Shura): Finished rescuing Rin. Thanks. To be brief, can you guys start searching for Tatsuma?
Bon: What happened to the monk?
Call: The last place Mamushi saw him has no trace of Tatsuma ever being here.
-end Flashback-
Page 5:
Bon: Monk!
Shura: First, you must find the monk first and then afterwards ask him for more details about the letter. However, you must not approach the Impure King. You can't recklessly tell anyone else the details of the situation right now. Bye!
Shura: Now that Rin has been let out of the strongest prison, they can secretly start their operation [to save Tatsuma!]
Shura: Now then, should I tell Yukio or not?
-w-;; ...Though I don't want to give him even more pressure than he already has.
*skips over*
Shura: "Yukio, I want to apologize for the situation before. Sorry <3"
Yukio: Huh?
-Page 6-
Yukio: Even if you apologize now, it's already....(I'm unsure of the sentence here) Because from the beginning, I didn't have any hope like you do. (referring to: Rin being saved)
Shura: Yukio, no matter what happens, always be honest to yourself.
Yukio: ....What's that supposed to mean...?
Man: High inspector Kirigakure! The director is looking for you
Shura: Yes, yes, lead me to him.
Man: Everyone's acting cowardly. This is the first time [a demon problem/battle has come up?] and such a huge demon to fight too...
Shura: Big or small, the best thing to do is have more practice
Man...too many complicated words O.O) Something about it being too scary and only a certain master can take care of it
Man: Really terrifying!!
-Page 7-
Shura: That said- seeing this kind of weird thing is a first for me too.
Man: What?!
-Page 8-
Shura: Now, what are you guys planning to do?
Another man: To summon...(I don't know what the name will be, but) the bird demon! Because we need 10 hands to summon the best
-yada yada yada pertaining to the beast-
*if anyone is interested from pages 9-12, then tell me otherwise, I'm just gonna start from p. 13*
-page 13-
Man: Attack!!
Kamiki: Th-That-! Is that the monk?!
Everyone?: Monk!
Bon: How-How could this happen?
Konekomaru: I'm contacting Kirigakure-sensei.
-Page 14-
Bon: Wh-what?
Karura: -unsure- Something about as the familiar or servant of the head priest of myouou dhrani ...i think
Bon: Karura?! The monk...the monk's familiar?!
Karura: However, this secret has already been leaked, so the oath is broken. Right now, Suguro-san is trying to fulfill unsure right here) his obligations and protect the people
Bon: Monk!!!
Tatsuma: Ow..I..
-Page 15-
Tatsuma: Ryuji...! What are you guys doing in a place like this...
Bon: We're here to save you
Tatsuma: How troublesome...*cough*
Karura: even though it's troublesome, we still need their help (or something like that)
Tasuma: Kakura? ...You've become really small.... I thought we both had died already (Funny, so did your fans!)
Karura: (skip, he's really annoying to translate, sorry. )
Tatsuma: Okumura-kun!
-Page 16-
Tatsuma: Have you already read my letter?
Rin: *nods* I have.
Bon: Everyone present knows all the details of the situation and the letter, that's why we came here.
Tatsuma: What?!
Bon: Now tell us all your secrets!
Tatsuma: ......I understand. I'll tell you how to defeat the Impure King
-Page 17-
Tatsuma: According to ___'s sacred text __, the Impure King can become as big as a city. Once it has grown, in the middle of the Impure King is a huge spore sack.
Shima: Is the spore sack like that?
Shima: Like that ball at the top of the mountain
Tatsuma: The most terrifying thing is that
Tatsuma: Once it has ripened, it will burst and a thick fog of miasma will spread everywhere
150 years ago, when that spore sack burst, it killed 40,000 people. But now, with today's population, it will be more than 40,000 people.
-Page 18-
Tatsuma: If we don't stop it-!
Bon: So we have to stop the Impure King before the spore sack bursts.
Tatsuma: The situation isn't simple. The Impure King has only one weakness and that's its heart, which is located inside the spore sack.
Tatsuma: 150 years ago, to fight the Impure King wasn't easy. (rough translation) IT was unknown how to defeat the demon, so someone cut the heart in half (with Kurikara?)
Kamiki: To speak of, this became the Impure King's right and left eye (Either I'm missing something here, but the eyes are apparently the Impure King's heart... O.o)
Kononekomaru: This is also to say...
-Page 19-
Kononekomaru: -if the spore sack doesn't burst, then there's no way to attack/destroy the Impure King's heart?
Tatsuma: Yes
Bon: That's really hard...
Tatsuma: 15 years ago, I received the flames and the power of Kakura in exchange of secrecy. I will keep his secrets until I die. Originally, I planned to keep these secrets and become the last enemy of the Impure King (basically he's breaking the vow by explaining the oath to Bon and co.)
Tatsuma: (unsure) I've collected 15 years worth of flames and wanted to use it to prevent the revival of the Impure King, but only a bit of the flame is left now.
-Page20-
Tatsuma: I will sparingly use the last bit of my flames to prevent the spore sack from bursting and spread miasma everywhere! (i'm not sure if he's saying to prevent, since translation of 構建 is construction)
That said-
Okumura-kun! Please use Kurikara to burn the Impure King's heart!
-Page 21-
Rin: I'm sorry, but-
Tatsuma: It's alright. This is a life-threatening situation after all.
Rin: Huh? No, that's not it. Just that, right now, I can't pull the blade out.
Everyone: WHAT?! ( )
Rin: Recently, I tried hard to pull it out, but it didn't work
Bon: What?! Why?!
Rin: I also don't understand. It's like a mind-boggling puzzle.
Bon: Now there's this problem!?
-Page 22-
Rin: I'm also distraught by this...so that's why I can't help Bon's old man! I'm sorry! Tatsuma: This really is worrisome
Tatsuma: However! Even if it's like this...I must end this myself...!!
Karura: You cannot, Tatsuma. You've already lost too much blood.
Tatsuma: What-?
Bon: Monk!
Karura: (there's two translations of this)
#1: Even if your wound healed, if you move around too much, you'll die from blood loss
#2: Although your wound was healed, was it a bit different, you would have died from blood loss. (i'm not sure which version is correct)
-Page 23-
Karura: This body condition is called the "Final Incantation" Without it, he will die. (not sure about the last bit)
Tatsuma: As long as I can prolong a bit longer, it'll be fine.
Tatsuma: This situation is more important than my life! (Oi oi! Your son, dammit! I don't want another Shirou and Rin situation!!!)
Bon: Kononekomaru! Have you contacted Kirigakure-sensei yet?
Kononekomaru: I tried, but every time it's busy. I think it's because the miasma is too thick around here.
Bon: Monk! Is there anything we can do?
Karura: Oya, this means you are Tatsuma's son. Then that's good.
Karura: (Contract! Make a Contract! ／人◕ ‿‿ ◕人＼ no, jk) Since the blood of the Myou Dia priests runs in your veins, my flames can transfer to you.
Bon: !
-Page 24-
Taruma: NO!! I cannot allow this to happen! Ryuji is just a child! I will not let him make the oath! (unsure) This sinful familiar and master relationship (the word sin is used, so i'm guessing this sinful relationship) will end with me! I bet my whole life on this oath! This bit of-
Bon: Oh, oh, so that's how it is....
-Page 2５-
-A bunch of flashbacks-
Bon: So, he acted that way and hid these secrets to protect everyone, all these responsibilities on one person...
－Page 26－
Tatsuma: Until now I've carried all these burdens....said...what...It was fun through it all. (That's literally what it says)
Bon: I can't let you do this anymore!
-Page 27-
I also want to carry this burden! Right now, you have no right to fight me!
Karura: Tatsuma...your son is more wise/worthy than you.
Tatsuma: .....!! ...Because he is this kind of son, I didn't want to draw him into this mess.
-Page 28-
Karura: Now then, let's start the [familiar transfer?] ritual. To make the oath, I will need a bit of your blood. You have the bloodline of Myou Dia's priests..(basically what he says when he becomes the new priests's familiar)
-Page 29-
Karura: Suguro Ryuji, from now on, you are the master of Karura.
Shima: Red flames..!
Tatsuma: Ryuji. Originally, I meant to hide this from you. Now I will tell you the strongest final incantation. Come here.
-Page 30-
Tatsuma: [The incantation] has some hand movements you've never seen before. From here, pay close attention. The worlds will only be said once, so pay attention and listen closely. Remember it all.
-Buddhist Incantation I will not translate. ;p-
Bon's Thoughts: Ryuji
-Page 31-
Bon's Thoughts: Didn't I tell you not to come here? ...What a troublesome child, but there's no helping it. Come here.
-Page 32-
-rest of Buddhist incantation "And here ends the final incantation"-
Bon: Monk!
Moriyama-san, Izumo-san, can I ask you two to stay and tend to his wounds?
Shiemi: Yes, Yes!
Kamiki: I understand.
Bon: Shima, Kononekomaru, go to where Kirigakure-sensei and everybody is. Tell them of everything that has happened here.
-Page 33-
Kononekomaru: Bon?
Bon: I will stop this. I will go to where the Impure King is and penetrate the spore sack and destroy the heart of the Impure King.
Kononekomaru: You're going to go up there?! That's too dangerous!!
Shima: Bon! Usually in these (parent and troublesome) situations, I won't say anything. But let me say one thing this time, You really will/can die if you go up there.
Rin: No problem!
-Page 34-
Rin: I will protect Bon!
Bon: Huh?! Huh?!
Rin: No worries?!! Even if I can't pull the sword out, I can more or less use a bit of my flames! Plus, I'm really~ strong!
So will you trust me, Kononekomaru?
Kononekomaru:....!
Shima: Eh? What about me?
-Kononekomaru runs off-
Shima: W-Wait! Kononekomaru! Seriously! You guys will regret treating me so carelessly! (To be brief, he's complaining.)
-Page 35-
Bon: Then I'll leave the monk to you two
Shiemi: Yes! Leave it to us!
Bon: Che-! Then we're leaving!
Rin: ! Oi, oi!
Shiemi: Be-Be careful!
Tatsuma: I'm really sorry. Ryuji, please forgive me for being a useless father.
-Page 36-
Bon: I...I love the sutras the monk chanted. That's why I will absolutely not let you die! (smug look you got there, Rin)
-Page 37-
Tatsuma: :'(
Frightened Man: Ah, ah, ah ah!!
-Page 38-
-Shot-
Frightened Man: !!
Yukio: Are you okay?
Frightened Man: Yeah...it went away.
Yukio: What is this. Unimaginable. The surrounding environment sounds seem so far away. This doesn't seem real. (he's focused on defeating the Impure King, but his mind isn't there. This feels like a dream to him, or that's what I'm getting from the translation)
Yukio: -Flashback of Shura's words- Yukio, be more honest towards yourself
Yukio: A red light? Where is it coming from?
-Page 40-
Yukio: Tudou-san?! B-But he looks like a teenager now?1 Those flames-What are they?
Yukio: How should I secretly go and alert the others? That said...
Tudou: Hey.
Yukio: ?!
-Page 41-
Tudou: I know you're here. Where are you? There's no use hiding.
Tudou: Come out Okumura Yukio-kun
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That'll help for names. But thanks to Dan for translating it for us! :O
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