Halloween Colors Entry Form
Username: Saravi Boo
Image of My Entry: http://img90.imageshack.us/img90/8986/97770.png

And I'm not changing my avi until it has been accepted. I earned my lesson in the last event. lol

I Have A Clue! Entry Form
Username: shadami
Image of My Entry:http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v2...detective2.png
What the crime was: In most cases, detectives obey the law to a T, but this Shirley Homes never abides by the rules. Many a door has she smashed in while tracking the clues left behind by whatever culprit she is on the heels of. And many times has she been tossed in a holding cell after brawling in streets and back alleys. Will she ever learn restraint?
Tools of mischief used to conduct your crime her intuition, body, and pure lack of restraint .
Where the crime occurred: Wherever crimes are committed, she is one step behind.

Shadami: you are REALLY close to being an entry I can accept..BUT not quite there....Revisit the rules in my contest please :)

i always do that!!! >.> why can i never write the correct Number of sentences. oy!

i edited it

Much better! Thanks!

i use to many commas... thhat must be it...

Yeah, a sentence ends with a period not a comma....SOOOOoo, if it does not have a period, I don't count it ;)

I love the idea of the law man being the person that's even worse than the criminal. XD good job Shadami. :)

curse me for using half proper english. xD

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OH! thank yoU! :D

Halloween Colors Entry Form
Username: Kiari
Image of My Entry: http://i45.tinypic.com/2wqafj7.jpg

Not sure if my hair is brown enough to be qualified, if not just let me know and I will fix it.

I hate to tell you that your avi isn't allowed to have green, blue, or white Kiari, so your entire background is out. I don't think she'll accept it. And that hair has yellow and purple in it that will most likely render it unacceptable as well. Nice outfit though. Hope you can tweak it.

yeah I thought I might need to fix it, didn't know if the background color mattered though. I went through like 4 backgrounds XD

ok... how about this one?

Halloween Colors Entry Form
Username: Nephila
Image of My Entry: http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v6...owsart/M10.png

Halloween Colors Entry Form
Username:~LONGCAT~
Image of My Entry: http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a1/...oweencolor.png

EDIT: Not acceptable. Redo.

if i change my avi before its accepted can i just edit it into my previous submission?

Hey Cat!
Your gloves and boots have white in them, your hair is yellow, and there is gold in your hat, sash and frame! D; I'm certain Linny won't accept your entry as is, but tweak those and you should be fine! I love your avatar!

:< the gingerbread set is all I have for browns.
Ah well. I'll change what I can.

The best word of advice I can give you about orange hair is to make the base color a more reddish orange, and the highlight color and more yellowish orange. It works best if they're on the extremes. If you want the color to be more of a yellowish orange, then make the base color a less reddish orange. :3 for Beach, the best color combo I can conjour is: base #eb3e00 highlight #ffae47

I changed the hair already to a more orange color. I'm not worried about that. It's trying to find something to work as brown when almost all I own is white. The hat was an item preview that I took to photoshop to get rid of the background. :/

hmm.. never thought to erase the background in item preview...

Hey I'm crafty. I can't find anyone to lend me the item so I make do. ;3

I sent you a trade. But you can keep the items if you'd like. :)

<3 thanks Neller. You'll be getting them back soon I promise!

i'm still trying to find away around the lack of hairy items. xD

Try using the hair style where all the hair is in your face?