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#401
Old 02-16-2010, 06:21 AM

Well I'm not sure the love of death but I don't think we've restricted ourselves to love poetry this event. After all this is also Lunar new year.

That is very nice. If you want to enter it into the contest you need to use the form in the second post.

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#402
Old 02-16-2010, 06:23 AM

Excellent poem PerfectlyPervertedKitty. Very moving and sad.

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Old 02-16-2010, 06:25 AM

@ Acobjum- thanks and just call my kitty or kitten

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#404
Old 02-16-2010, 06:28 AM

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Originally Posted by Acobjum View Post
It stole three small hearts
Yet did not give me the clue
Oh where do I go?
The same happened here
Three hearts gone, but still no hint
I'm rather confused.

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#405
Old 02-16-2010, 06:30 AM

Re click on the item thumbnail both clues will show.

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#406
Old 02-16-2010, 06:30 AM

Um, I just saw this and figured I'd write something brief for the contest, largely since I haven't written in so long. I'm a bit rusty though. XD"

I would like to apply for the V-Day contest!
Author: Luenola Marxiel
Poem Title: An Ode to the Unrequited
Poem:
Swimming in the sand
in this hourglass we share
I think to reach for your hand
but I almost wouldn't dare
'cause I don't know how I'd take it
if you turned away
I don't know how you'd take it,
what I'm trying to say
Yet I'd like for you to know
even this uncertainty
I'd take a yes or no
over lies or secrecy
Because it's beautiful
to hold love in your heart
more so than painful
that we must live apart
So I'm telling all the world,
so I don't regret,
all these feelings now unfurled
that I never will forget
I'm so happy that we met.

Personal Comments: I wish I could come up with a better title, but I'm really bad at titles, so I suppose this will have to do. Sorry for the cheesiness, but you did say it had to be a love poem... :stare:

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#407
Old 02-16-2010, 06:31 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Xandriana View Post
Re click on the item thumbnail both clues will show.
It didn't work for me.

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#408
Old 02-16-2010, 06:37 AM

We were together
Planning on forever
The wedding impending
Our love to be contracted
But as we walked home
After a lively party
We took a new route
Which causes much grief
And I have but one question
Directed just at you
Why did you take the bullet
Instead of letting me for you

There =) deathly poetic loveness?

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#409
Old 02-16-2010, 06:39 AM

Huh weird.

Notes Play soar dance flit
Reactions we share where here
notes build we discus.

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#410
Old 02-16-2010, 06:39 AM

I have a poem that been in a head for a while, but I hadn't written it yet. :S It's about the Land of Dreams.

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#411
Old 02-16-2010, 06:40 AM

My apologies for not talking much... my internet hates me

Edit - feel free to write it liz =3

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#412
Old 02-16-2010, 06:40 AM

I do not have confidance in myself to enter my poems

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#413
Old 02-16-2010, 06:41 AM

I can appreciate that, Kaze. =3

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#414
Old 02-16-2010, 06:41 AM

Bad internet, Bad
Let Kaze play
Let her speak
Let her rhyme
We wish to play with her
Do not take our time.

@Kitty Just do it go ahead and enter the worst that could happen is you don't win. We won't be saying anything unkind.

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#415
Old 02-16-2010, 06:42 AM

I will Kaze-bear, when it comes to me. :)

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Old 02-16-2010, 06:44 AM

Oh what shall I do
To find that last item true?
This makes me cry Poo!

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#417
Old 02-16-2010, 06:44 AM

XD Xan that was a cute poem
@ Lue - Ironically o.o I have no personal experiences with anything tragic love related... so that's the best I can do

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Old 02-16-2010, 06:45 AM

Ruin But Not Broken

I saw you at the bar one night,
You ask to buy me a drink.
Two days later you call my house,
I was happy as can be.
Three months later I though we were in love,
You gave me a ring & ask for my hand.

You hand me a glass of wine,
& said you love me forever.
I woke up the next morning & you were gone,
I started me flow & had bad pains.
You told me you had so business to do,
Then we will wed real soon.

Days went by & still no word,
I thought you would come home for sure.
I started to gain weight and feel sick,
The doctor told me I was pregnant with your kid.
I was shocked & didn’t know what to say,
Because you raped me then ran away.

Weeks went by; my belly got be,
I’m not ready for a kid.
My friends try to get me to have an abortion,
Saying I cannot afford the baby.
I know there right and I should,
But it’s no good; I just cannot kill my child.

It’s week thirty two now & his dust,
Because his latest conquest blows him up.
I’ll have twins soon without there farther,
But who needs a man like that anyways.
I’ll get by, just you what & see,
Us three will live our life without regret.

He may have took my virginity & ruined my plans,
But he will never break me of my love for life & for myself.

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#419
Old 02-16-2010, 06:50 AM

Another excellent and compelling poem Kitty!

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#420
Old 02-16-2010, 06:53 AM

Quote:
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Oh what shall I do
To find that last item true?
This makes me cry Poo!
Look Where things of print
video, music are discussed
Where are the notes played

@PerfectlyPervertedKitty I think you should enter. The only reason I do not is I am a judge. If you are strong enough to display them here take the next step and enter.

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#421
Old 02-16-2010, 06:53 AM

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XD Xan that was a cute poem
@ Lue - Ironically o.o I have no personal experiences with anything tragic love related... so that's the best I can do
Haha, I kinda do, but I feel like you don't need to have experienced something to be able to empathize with people who have..?

Also, Acobjum.
I'm rocking to the beat
I'm dancing in this heat
If you're jamming, here's my clue
Let me sing this song for you

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#422
Old 02-16-2010, 06:55 AM

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Haha, I kinda do, but I feel like you don't need to have experienced something to be able to empathize with people who have..?

Also, Acobjum.
I'm rocking to the beat
I'm dancing in this heat
If you're jamming, here's my clue
Let me sing this song for you
Very nice Way to dance around it.


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#423
Old 02-16-2010, 06:55 AM

I agree with Luenola Marxiel; I write mostly depressing things and I have never personly experienced such things before.

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#424
Old 02-16-2010, 06:56 AM

Found it, thanks!

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#425
Old 02-16-2010, 06:57 AM

I have experienced the deaths of loved ones and a friend, But I've never relay experienced tragic love. I yearn for love but I haven't found that yet. Sometimes our heart knows a thing before we do.

Hum that last bit suggest a poem. I'll have to mull it around.

 


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