Well, Fey said she had to go to eat some dinner and Kage left a bit ago, so I'm posting their updated Critic for them. =]

OPENING DAY ACTS:

Team Name: Gypsies
Task #: 4
Act:

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Spectacular! Daring! Awe-inspiring! These are just a few words that describe the show put on by the Menewshan Gypsies yesterday. The Gypsies dazzled people with beautiful music, exotic dancing, enchanting magic acts and dangerous acrobatics. Crowds 'Ooh'ed and 'Ah'ed as they watched the performers jingle, tumble, sing and chant. The bright colors gave a feast to the eyes as silks and ribbons flowed from the dancers costumes, giving an elegant feel to the energetic movements. The well-composed music really gave the patrons a feel for the entire show, accompanying all the acts with cheery tambourine tempos to melodramatic violin work. The night of dancing, sword balancing and future-reading was a huge hit. But that's just what is seen on the stage. The men and women who put it all together had an amazing time as well. They worked hard to make sure each and everything was in it's place. Each costume was artfully made, filled with unique attributes and delicate embroidery. Each prop was spit-shinned until it shone with a beauty that one would only imagine in the realm of their dreams, the decorations were skillfully made and astoundingly beautiful and they even had a floating stage! Not only that, but they worked tirelessly on each act, meticulously practicing each movement until it could not be improved upon any further. It was clear that the Menewshan Gypsies had put a lot of work into their shows. With perfectly timed dancers, death-defying acts, and even a beautifully scenic location, the audience entered and left with equal amounts of excitement. Every part of this night filled the hearts of all. Children and parents alike enjoyed taking rides on their Camel, which also happened breathe fire. Tents surrounded the lake on which the stage was set, allowing people to roam about and get their fortunes told. Performers ran about, juggling swords and spinning plates. Everything was set and prepared, providing the perfectly seamless illusion that we had all wandered into some marvelous fantasy world. "It was hard getting everyone together at the right moments and perfecting all the routines... but I think that it's well worth it. Even though our camel did eat a hole in Kage's pants... at least that kept him from complaining about it being too hot to juggle his swords." Says Feyona, one of the performers. "I can't tell you all the hours I've spent practicing, but it doesn't matter, It's all worth it." Says Kage, swordsman and acrobat. They all agree that the work was tough and exhausting, but like any good performers, they love what they do. I think we can all expect to see them again in the future as the performers say: "I think it went marvelously! I haven't had this much fun in a long time and I would do it again in a heartbeat."- Feyona " I'm still grinning like an idiot from the success! I would go through all of it again, even the Camel incident." –Kage

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This is one of the worse pieces of trash I've ever wasted my time on. I can’t believe the money I just threw away last night! I thought that they were joking when they they had said fire-breathing camels... but NOOOOO. Not only did it breathe fire, but it set a piece of the stage on fire and scorched my FAVORITE HAT! The nerve of such camels! What ugly beasts they are. And it smelled horrible. Don’t they ever wash their animals? Someone should report them for animal cruelty, because there’s no way that camel is being properly cared for. It even had the nerve to poo right in front of everyone. My purebred dog at least has the decency to hide behind a bush! Didn’t even have to teach her that! The sword thrower was decent...but the dancers were just a little bit off sync. How can they even think to call themselves professional if they can’t even get the timing right? Honestly, what were they really doing during all that time they were supposedly practicing? And the fortune teller was complete rubbish. I will NOT fall in love with another girl, I am certain of that. Humph! The nerve, filling people with such ideas and perverting their minds. On top of that (as if it could get even worse from there), the stage decorations were shotty and it was WAY too loud. Pieces were falling off all over the place, and I nearly lost my life on a fallen decoration that had shattered. And I am certain someone should have called the police and enforced the noise limit. There were several neighborhoods nearby, all with houses with people in them who may have actually been trying to sleep. I don't think I have ever been more disappointed in anything in my entire life. My friends TOLD me I should have gone to the Opera instead like I really wanted to, but I decided to give it a try. They certainly made it sound interesting, and I figured I should review something different for a change. Ha... never again. I now know better than to ever waste my time with anything on a lower level than the Bolshoi Theatre again. Though, I suppose it turned out well that I should have to opportunity to remind everyone of the rubbish that was seen last night. In closing, the performance was shoddy—at best. It was poorly planned, moved too quickly, and filled with sub-par performers. And here’s what they had to say for themselves: "Sometimes it felt like the crowd wasn't all that into some of the acts, but hey, not everyone likes the same things." - KageShio "I have to admit it could have been a lot better... there was a point that I lost my balance for just a little bit while I was dancing and almost fell over completely." -FeyonaSaibre "I'm really glad that I managed to fix my slip-up, I could have hurt myself bad with those torches.... Luck 'o the irish, ne? Well, that is, if I was Irish." - KageShio "I'm just happy it's all said and done with. I mean, a lot of fun though it may be... I do get so tired after dancing all day." - FeyonaSaibre

Added the jesters entry. Oh, and it looks like I have another entry to add. 8D

Starr, I can take it for partial credit, since there aren't images with it as required. Is that all right?

0.0 If there's time...I could draw images, if that's alright...?

D8 There is unfortunately no time. It's 6:59 pm. I'll take it for partial, then?

DX Okay...whatever credit we can get is fine.

Well i just finished #5 on the opening acts one. Just in time too, so it would seem...

Ya! *high fives*

All right then. *Mai adds to list*

Thanks for participating in this round, everyone. 8D I just want to say that I have really enjoyed seeing all your entries and how you work together and encourage each other, even through the set-backs we've had. 8) Thank you for being such great teams, and I hope that you are all looking forward to the bonus round. Now go and get some nice R&R!

*Mai throws confetti because confetti is awesome and the teams are awesome, then hugs the fire-breathing camel because mammalistic flamethrowers are awesome, too*

Oops, I guess I was late, just finished an assignment, too late to post it..

Whooo! Mannn we really pulled through today! *super proud* Can't wait for tomorrow! >D

You really did~!! Tomorrow's the bonus day, I can't wait.

Ya, seriously! I'm DEFINITELY gonna sleep tonight. *nodnod* >.>

Good job everyone.
I've really enjoyed lurking in here. ^^

I'm just happy we're not lagging so far behind anymore... o.o

Same! ^_^

omg! we're almost getting even with the Jesters!!! :D *crosses fingers that my home computer holds up*

Come on, LaVida's computer! Just hang in there!!

go for it, catch up to the jesters :)

^_^ We plan on it! >D

man, the artist team must have really been cranking out the work! O_O

Seriously. They were almost done by the time I woke up. DX