Kisu, I can't really remember if a day's passed, but I'd like to know if you're still looking to make up that thread to help your writing. Just let me know and I'll set something up!
Oh, I'll point them out when I see them! I'll let you know from now on, but I didn't see any obvious mistakes.
My horses don't really need training, much more than to stay in their yard and accept riders without turning on them. I let them do what they want, most of the time.
Sorry my post is so short, by the way, and I understand. I'll be heading off in a bit too.
Oh, I've noticed mistakes, at least two in each post, I just didn't mention them because I hadn't been asked to.
Oh, of course! Animals, and children, are my life, I love them all. Fauna isn't the largest, she could be considered a pony, in a way, but she's so sweet.
I love my babies. Fauna is rather thin for a horse, delicate, I guess you could say, so when the kids want a ride, I only let the smaller kids have a go. They're both beautiful, but I love any kind of horse.
Oh, of course we can start tomorrow! I think it would go well in the story discussion/help subforum. Seems most likely, anyway.
Oh, I could help you... Maybe start a thread in the Lit forum, where we can write together and I can point out your mistakes and help you through them so you don't make them anymore! Or, if you want... That's just a random thought, and it would help you learn and get both of us some extra gold. I don't think there's a rule against that, it's general writing and should go to the writing forum, anyway.
Oh, I have two horses, Fauna, a Lusitano, and Millie, a Palomino, and a dog named Hazel and a cat named Bones. They're beautiful, all of them. The horses were gifts when I left home, my parents were kind enough when they came for a visit one Christmas.
Well, I've been writing for twenty or so years. I've practiced all the time! You'll get better, I know it, just practice. And besides, you're already a good writer in general!
Yes, that's what I meant. That's why I use Microsoft Documents to write my replies. Oh, and sorry about the very long paragraphs, that was my chance to show Lucian's angry side! And how he starts to form into one of his demonic sides.
I guess writing a lot is what I love to do, and having such limited space on a phone like that is really annoying, so I prefer to stay away from phones and so on.
Oh, it's okay. I don't like typing on those phones, it's too difficult. So I understand mistakes. I just thought I would point that particular one out!
I'm Kisu. In real life, and here. I also answer to Karma. Works out well. ^u^
I am very active in my local BDSM community.
I breed snakes.
I will be the Grandmaster Sol and take Trellirelli's spot in Smite.
I play games far too much.
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I obsess about good roleplays far too much.
I...am simply too much. XD
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