Wow, that was amazing. I want to live in such a place... especially with horses. We should definitely either go there in our story or have another story based off of it :)
You hit it right on the head. I prefer older students, and it sounds like you do amazing with younger :) Sorry I have been away so long. Had to plan lessons for the others for Monday and Tuesday... I'm going to Japan to get my visa :D
Interesting... Sort of like Yaleunya(One of my characters, and also the name I am using here)'s world would be, if it weren't for the whole magic-and-elves thing.
Conflict... In what form? Social issues? War? Lost animals and landslides? What sort of weapons would they have, assuming they even have weapons? Swords? Guns? Bow and arrow? Or just improvising from whatever tools are around? Would they need weapons? Ugh, I think I'm confusing myself a bit.
... Well, what sort of things would be possible in this place? It's clear from your description of Lola that it's not exactly dragons, castles, and bloody wars over pretty girls, but what is there in it? Is the television around yet? Is this an alternate world where there is no such thing as television? (Why am I using television as an example when I never watch it?) Stuff like that, I'd like to know.
Right. (Would it be a bit much for me to say thank you again?)
... I'm confused. Are we going to at some point stop talking about stories in general and start talking about this specifically, and if so, at what point is that?
... See, this is why I don't usually try to make jokes online... I honestly can't tell whether you're sort of laughing with me, or if you think I was being entirely serious.
All failed joking aside, there's whether conflict would be between a protagonist and an antagonist, a protagonist and several antagonists, several protagonists, several protagonists and one antagonist... Ugh, why do I get confused over things like this? Are they even that important?
Yes... Well, depending on how much room there is for humor in the story. If there's lots of room for it, it might involve someone crashing through the roof, but I'm pretty sure that's not what would fit this.
Fluttershy
