Than I don't believe you understood Gwen that well. She was trying to get Anna to realize she may of gone through a lot but she was not alone. Along with the fact she was willing to give her life even though she professed how much she cared for her brother. Just had to ask the King. Would of gotten his attention well enough knowing people were lying about being his mean and destroying his village. I didn't want Gwen speaking that out loud, wanted Anna to figure it our herself not be guided along. Because I can say Gwen will not be there the whole time to mediate the relationship between the King and her.
You don't have to edit it. Just please don't make your character have a more horrible life. It is how the person handles it, not what is worse. The King is could and compassionless, felt no love in his life. If she shows him the love he lived without, he will change and become the better King you want. She can humble him easily without having a past riddled with horrible things.
It is not a touchy subject. Your character just became a Mary-sue once you crossed that thin line. Just hard for me because Gwen would of saw the scars in the beginning of the roleplay. This is mainly the fact I'm getting so tired of playing male characters to a girl who has had some horribly traumatic life. It ruins a roleplay fast. I'm sorry, I'm being honest for once than just keeping quiet.
They can learn from each other because their pain is coming from different things. He has had a life with no love or happiness. Your girl was loved and still is from her brother. She could of shown him that. Your character doesn't need to suffer more than mine. Sorry, you pissed me off when you brought the rape stuff up. I really do not like characters like that. Your character was all good being alone and with her brother, you didn't have to go that far. Sorry.