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Heh, I'm slow learner, believe me.

Oops, sorry I didn't think of that. I can edit it! Wouldn't be a problem. :)

Nevermind, you already replied. *rushes off to read*

Yes, I actually learnt it in school, but I'd more credit books, television and Internet for my English skills. If I only used it in school, would never have learned it, but all of those things forced me into using it. First, a channel on TV that was only in English, then music, books and Internet with RPs and fanfictions.

I'd appreciate any tips or pointing out my strange wording. Sometimes it's somewhat stylistically done, but most of the time, not so much. ^^;

But.... Thank you! I'm always glad to hear it's decent or good.

He's very refreshing from my other male characters. I think it will be interesting to watch him grow. But Adel's post turned a bit more stale/depressed. Uhh.

Phew. Now that's out of my system. I've not proofreaded it yet, will try to do in a moment.
I hope it's fine and I've not gone overboard. What I told you about action scenes? Clearly proven in Zenon's part.
He'll probably disappear for a bit, until he realizes Adel's missing. Later that night, probably.

Haha, yes, that could help. Either way you're doing wonderfully.

I'm actually half-done with the post. Or so. ^^;

And no, it's not, my first language is Latvian, it's nothing like English. I'm assuming you ask because of some oddly formed sentences or misused words. I am sorry for those, but feel free to point out any major issues, like my abuse of word 'the'.

I think it did. :D You certainly seem to have a ton more experience in writing action scenes. I've barely had any chance to practice them, so sorry if they're plain and/or boring-ish.
Sorry I couldn't get back to you tonight, I'll do my best to do it later. But now I really ought to hop off in a few.
Have a nice night!

Oh nooo. I like long and detailed posts. I also like to write them up myself, but I don't always manage to. ^^; I hope this one will be like that, though.
I take RP a bit like story in book and I like my stories nice and descriptive, that pull me in.

That's alright, I can push action forward there still. :)

THAT WAS EPIC.
Like. Totally.
Now to make an epic reply to you. Or at least semi-epic. Poor Adel...

Hm, well, I guess I'll see then. :) I don't want to make him too smart, rofl.

Decided to give you space for a post. I'm thinking, either other ships could fall for trap and Zenon not exit before alarms sound off in other ships, taking off in hurry, or he exits partially, but manages to get back and the ship up from ground somehow, with net half on.