I had to read the whole thing, then I went back to read it more specifically, and sometimes I do skip over certain words or sometimes, whole sentences... I do it while writing too! I just make sure to reread my writing before posting...
Ah, I must have skipped over a couple details, the eyes for one. Ah, well, on to continue my post! Sorry it's taking a little longer than I anticipated, had to go do something in the rain...
Yes! Although I do wonder a bit about your character, his age, his general appearance. I'd hope to describe him a little in a blurry first impression...
Very good then! Glad to have everything set in order, that's for sure... I'll sit here and watch you uncomfortably while you work. *sits in the corner and stares at*