Hm. Well, the first was considered a 'pilot' episode, in which it's longer than the others, excluding 'finales' which are also as long as the pilot or premiers. So this one was fifteen and a half pages... Perhaps we could put a cap at eleven or thirteen pages? Probably no less than ten.
Oh, no, they're just fine. Waterproof, and all that, so they're for any outdoor activity. Not that I wear glasses or goggles if swimming, no real need since everything is large enough to discern what it is and where it is...
Ah, I'm everything. I can't see a damn thing near, far, or anywhere in between! Yet my glasses magnify the world to insane sizes...
Ah, but remember a demon has no true human emotions. Only simulations. He'd seem to grow fond of her only to get close to the spirits that are attracted to her, to corrupt them and use them.
Yay! Part of the way through. Just having trouble organizing this sentence...
I have glasses! I didn't know you had any... My eyes are so bad I could use these as an extra lens in a telescope...
Oh! Befriend the demon!? That'd be amazing! He decides not to harm her because of her ties to the spirit world, she can sense and see and all that, like you said and was demonstrated, he'd find use for her. Oh, okay then! During one of the flashes over to Ed and Dylan I'll include a good chunk of memory as a very vivid dream, but make it a one-time thing for this particular episode...
Oh! Love it, as usual~! I'm all inspired too, I left my game to get a reply worked on right now.
Indeed it is. One must keep that in mind! *taps glasses thoughtfully*
Certainly! Some to be disposed of, others to keep around for later. I think we could do that... Perhaps make a pretty solid focus, beyond Em's recollections, to be Ollie's tracking of an especially difficult demon that's been attacking and killing humans in the guise of a human itself. With flashes to Eddie and Dylan to see how the camp is going. Maybe in episode three I'll start to make Eddie understand his dreams and force him to confront them in their entirety... Oh, yes... Then he'll start to struggle with whether to tell Dylan or not...