D'aw, I can't say you have! Getting carried away is... fifty paragraphs, or something... I doubt you did that in such a little amount of time...
Well, with hundreds of characters swimming in my mind, sometimes appearances will meld together even if it's exceptionally well done. Sometimes I almost call Gabriel Eddie, or might even get up to calling Cole by Dylan or Adam or someone else... Accidentally, of course!
Well, yes... I suppose. But that leaves two characters without.
Oh, good! I still haven't finished my character's history information... *sigh*
Oh I saw! Because I was lurking... She's really good, isn't she? I love her art... Hm... Maybe I'll request a change in characters if she hasn't gotten to mine yet...
Hmm... I think you'd be best to start, with knowledge of the murders at the specified place. It'd be the police/FBI that are notified first, after all, methinks.
Ahh, fascinating... I do that too, often, then I like the idea and pause to kind of put it together very well in my mind...
Yes he is. I would assume that they wouldn't meet or necessarily see each other---or at least my character wouldn't see them. We'll both be relying a lot on NPCs for communication in that sense, while he's going through the whole questioning, holding, releasing-on-too-little-evidence thing. I'm pretty sure the club will be reopened after a few days, cleanup and all that, since the owner would want to get things back up and running as soon as possible. You know, greedy and all that, would want his best guy back in practice even while he's under investigation.
So up to this there was little effort? Huh, could have fooled me! Hm... Start... Well, I was thinking that, on my end, it'd be before he even knows about a murder and is just going into the club in the morning, eventually seeing things roped off and curiosity being sparked.