This is partly why I dont like list intros. When people tell me all about their character. I can see how people have crated a perfect character and that just bugs me the crap out of me, So i feel like i have to say something to egt things worked out. A perfect character dosent give me much to work with, simply because 9 out of 10 times when I do something major to a Perfect character [eg. Cut and arm off or something] The character will just shrug it off and act like nothing happened. When people use Paragraph intros instead on List ones. I dont see those mistakes so much and it tends not to bugg me [>.< Sorry for rambling on like that.]
that makes for sense now. I understand how she is a social outcast. I dont mind that you revival everything about her when she meet her real parents. I have done that myself for some of my other roleplays.
Its just when I first read your bio I didnt see anything that could hint about her personality flaws. the fact she is an outcast isnt a real character flaw to me. A character flaw to me is: being greedy about money or quick to angry when something bad happens. When I read your Bio I got the feeling that she was nice to everyone all that time. That that part that got me thinking she was a perfect character. If you understand where im coming from?
Can you give me a hint of what personality she has? I dont need a full out paragraph just a couple of words.
*Does happy dance* Yippe!! Thank you Emma! *glomps* Ok, so I'll talk about the idea that I have right now, since if I don't get it out of my head, I'll be really sad.
So the basic idea is High School fame. I've never done anything this normal, so bear with me. Allison is an extremely shy High School Sophomore who has a deep creative music streak, a heart of gold, and a glitter fetish. Allison, (or Star, as she's called by her small group of friends) She decides to audition for the talent show at school (a dare) and unmistakenly catches the attention of an A&R agent at a very well-known record company.
A few weeks later, Lunastella- America's freshest new pop star is born. But this is only the begining. Will the fame crumble everything Allison stands for? Will the pressure kill her? Will she see the facts that are right in front of her?
But that's kind of the idea. Would you want to do something like that?
Yeah, strep is never fun. I remember one year when I was little and I got strep, and the week that I was out I had to miss all the feildtrips. It was sad. But get better OK DO YOU HEAR ME?
No problemo~!
Thank goodness indeed. I just want to week to be over. It's been so long and boring.
Actually I think I'd be scared. You know, that he'd like spirit someone I knew away... although I don't think I'D mind being taken away. I'd get to hang with him. 8D WE'D SING ALL THE SONGS FROM THE MOVIE.
Hi there, Emma. 8D My roommate's doing some sort of workout video with her friend, so no sleep for me yet. I'm pigging out on chips. What's up with you?
I just went back and reade the profile you posted and I am unsure of what going on with you character. It seems like your trying to tell me that at the people she gose to school with like her, but at the same time she is social outcast.. it dosent really make sense to me. The way you wrote your bio Kinda made your character come across as perfect
[Side note: I dont mean to sound mean or anything, that just what I was thinking]
I am an artist, a writer, and a lover of everything Disney. I'm a full time college student and I love to roleplay when I have the time, which is usually only on breaks.
Click below to view my artwork. (These are very outdated and rarely updated.)
http://fruitsdrops.deviantart.com/
http://fruitdropphotography.deviantart.com/
Location
New York
Interests
Reading, Writing, Drawing
Occupation
Graduate | Business Owner | DS Rep. | English Tutor