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Rain:] 12-14-2009 06:11 AM

Good; The colors go well nicely with the background too.
Bad; Either change your eyes or lips to a different color, they interfere with eachother.

Rylynne 12-14-2009 06:28 AM

The Good: It's a very clean-cut avatar~ Pretty in its simplicity. ;3

The Harsh: While pretty in its simplicity, it could still use an item or two more, like a necklace?

ghostPastry 12-14-2009 06:30 AM

Good: It's super-cute and I looooove the colors! :3
Harsh: It's a bit clutterly.

Elwing 12-14-2009 10:31 AM

Good: The socks with those shoes <3
Harsh: A bit dull due to black & white, and needs a white belt.

Codette 12-14-2009 01:58 PM

Good: all the colours are well balance and compliment each other
Harsh: The Yumeh pop is kinda in the middle of no where...

The Enchanted Tiara 12-14-2009 02:48 PM

Good: Looks like a very pretty spirit of Christmas (like I said in the other thread, lol.) I like the theme of it a lot.

Bad: The eyes don't quite go with it. They are just too light of a green.

Sizzla 12-14-2009 03:18 PM

The good: I'm liking the pink theme you've got going on so far.
The bad: The Heaven Kitty doesn't go with the rest of your outfit at all.

neller 12-14-2009 08:25 PM

Good: All the colors match and its very well balanced
Bad: The one gold head piece stands out.

BinkaKitty 12-14-2009 10:03 PM

good: awesome theme
harsh: need different shoes

XxXx-Eternal-Snow-xXxX 12-15-2009 12:44 AM

good~ i love how simple and yet cute it is
harsh~ the use of such a dark pinkish color against such light pinks throws off everything you have going on at the bottom half

Robard 12-15-2009 01:04 AM

The setting complements the avatar beautifully...
...but it's Christmas and there's no snow in sight! At least going sleeveless can be comfortable.

Mayyybe small earrings? But I like the simplicity of the head with the crazy gown.

Cora 12-15-2009 04:13 AM

Its bright and cheerful

but your blues and greens are very central and not much anywhere else.

Rain:] 12-15-2009 05:45 AM

Good; It's cute and it flows.
Harsh; Too much white, perhaps?

BinkaKitty 12-15-2009 05:58 AM

good: the colors are great!
harsh: the shoes don't match

Sizzla 12-15-2009 02:32 PM

Good: I enjoy the color scheme.
Bad: Unfortunately, none of the pinks really match except for the cutie skirt and the shoes...

Codette 12-15-2009 04:45 PM

good: colourful, intriging, always amazing!
harsh:the gold flower on the other side of your head, really doesn't fit...

Cora 12-15-2009 05:53 PM

Good- nice and christmasy

harsh-too much red o.0

Rylynne 12-15-2009 06:01 PM

I'll judge this as an avatar itself, and not as part of your Project Mene challenge, okay? XP <3<3

The Good : I like the lines in this avatar. :>

The Harsh : Some things stick out too much. And not in a very nice way, I'm sorry. xDD;;

Death_to_the_reaper 12-15-2009 08:32 PM

Good- Colors all match.
Bad- The look of the glasses on your face.

Codette 12-15-2009 09:02 PM

Good: nice use of layers
Harsh: it's all red except for your boots, and not even the same reds, it's a little displeasing to the eye.

Cami 12-15-2009 10:02 PM

It all looks very good together. You resemble a Christmas spirit.

I've never liked that skirt. Which isn't your fault, but makes me like the avie just a little less.

BinkaKitty 12-15-2009 10:38 PM

good: the bunny had is cute
harsh: nothing at all goes together.

Demoncat 12-16-2009 12:16 AM

Good: the purple and black blend well together.
Harsh: I dunno, maybe add one more item, it seems fine to me though. :)

Cora 12-16-2009 12:18 AM

Orange and black are nice colors

but you could use some shoes xP

Rain:] 12-16-2009 02:29 AM

I love where your avatar is right now. The colors and everything are just WONDERFUl.
Even so, the hearts kind of ruin the whole fire thing. ^_^


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