Emotionless
A gentle pinkish promise.
Secrets tucked safely in whispers. Not a sound comes from my own though. Am I mute? I heard the notes in my head. A lovely but lonely melody placed on the wind. How could I be sure that those are the true sounds? Am I deaf? I follow along side everyone else. I feel as if I am being guided. Maybe I would get lost on my own. Am I blind? I can no long enjoy my favorite things. It all has been ruined for me. Not by greed but by the emptiness within each pleasure. Can I not feel a thing? I remember that I can not feel. I am not mute, deaf, or blind. But because I lost everything I feel like I am. Yet I do not feel a single thing. |
wow that was really filled with emotion, it captured me and made me read to the very end. You're a very good writer, so write on.~M
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["When the war of the beasts brings about the world's end
The goddess descends from the sky Wings of light and dark spread afar She guides us to bliss, her gift everlasting"] |
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It's quite an interesting poem. I like how it touches on all the senses ^^
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Why thank you.~ I like writing poems every now and then so I am glad people like them.
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