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MadhatterMiss 02-05-2015 03:40 PM

Read my poem and tell me your thoughts~
 
Erased

I wish I could erase,
every smile,every laugh,
all the moments in my memory,
we will ever have,
I wish I could just let you go,
let the pain just end,
but who would I have to remember,
my brother,your best friend,
you love me and you leave me,
always in a flash,
giving my heart no time,
to loosen up its grasp,
do you love me,
or are you lying?
so you say,you speak the truth,
then you forget that I exist,
there I go,
just,"Poof!"
give yet another girl everything you have,
then come crawling here,
because you know i'll take you back,
No one can hurt me,
or love me just like you,
my heart it weeps such sadness,
and there is nothing I can do,
but no longer will I be your filler girl,
I've waited around through two,
you left me weak and battered,
and strength was found,
while black and blue,
please love her I beg you,
but don't love her like you do I,
she deserves so much more,
than my broken hearted sigh.

Babyblueyez25 02-05-2015 03:49 PM

Aww [sosad] very well written. Sorry for whatever inspired you to write hurt like this [glomp]

MadhatterMiss 02-05-2015 03:55 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Babyblueyez25 (Post 1773192518)
Aww [sosad] very well written. Sorry for whatever inspired you to write hurt like this [glomp]

It's an old poem about an ex, who also happened to be my passed brother's best friend. Thank you though.


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