drew my avatar
 

I posted this in pricing assistance too but I wanted to put it up for critiques as well. I've really only done realism this year and I'm kind of rusty when it comes to more manga-styled stuff.
do you guys think that the arms are too long? usually I make them too short. e.e

and I know that the scan is messy. I tried a new way of editing that doesn't work as well as my old way. =x (I use a camera rather than a scanner so it's never a flat gray to get rid of).

http://fc08.deviantart.net/fs70/f/20...by_Ryshuki.png

ooo nice, lots of detail put into the hair, scarf and clothing, i like i like. what other art pieces have you done? i want to see.

Thanks :D

My deviantart account is Ryshuki, although I haven't updated it much in a while.

Very nice detail on the hair and feathers. However, I also suggest for going for the same sort of detail on the wings on your head and your slippers. They are hard to make out being solid black against the rest of the picture which is nicely shaded.

Wow, that's really great Hug, the detail in the boa is fantastic

I love the varying line width, especially in the scarf/sash. And the way you drew the fox! :heart:

The only area I think needs work is the arm that is mostly covered by the boa. The hand is very tiny, and looks disconnected from the rest of the figure.

There's a lot of detail. I also love your style. I don't like only the shoes - they look just too plain.

I love this, the detail is really good. Especially all the detail in the boa and the way you did the scarf. Maybe the calves/ankles could have been a bit wider? I really like the right hand aswell. Well done C:

that is awesome

thanks for the crits<3

I really like it! It's so pretty and the textures you made on the skirt and the boa are fabulous (although the skirt looks a little woodish - but I still like it). The hand on our right looks odd I can see how it could just be the fingers making it not too small, but I'm having trouble imagining how the arm is placed so that hand would be like that. I also think that the animal could use some more texture. Not a whole lot, just a little.