~Mikio's Pixel Studio ~
 

Here I will share my pixels and WIPs. Feedback is very appreciated <3

Open for feedback!

Might change the collar as the more I look at it the odder it gets XD also going to edit the pockets.

I really like the jacket so far. It already has a near finished feel. I do agree the collar on the left side is a little odd though.

Thanks, Kat ^^ [glomp] will work on this piece more as soon as I'm done with my dissertation.

Oooh, good luck with that! [:D]

Worked on this suspender skirt. Feedback? Any tips in regards to shading?
https://i.imgur.com/fW1FPEU.png

There's a few things I can see straight away with out enlarging it in photoshop.

• Not following light source.
• The inside lines are to harsh and shouldn't be the same shade as the outer line. (The pleats of the skirt and also the suspenders are to dark)
• The middle band of the skirt shouldn't be straight across. It should follow the curve of the body.
• The shading in the waist band is flat. It looks like it was just shaded around the harsh lines of the folds and suspender clasps.
• The bottom is lop sided. So is the start of the waist pleats. - If this was suppose to be an asymmetric design it should be more exaggerated, if not then then it's lop sided.
• The suspender lines are to harsh, making them look jagged. Tiny things need all 6 colors too. Reference the suspenders we have in buckle up. They'll also show you which way the light is coming from.
• The suspenders are also cutting in her neck.
• The ruffles need more than 2 shades for me to tell whats up. They look like they're still being worked on.

Over all. The concept is really cute, and I'd love to see you continue with this piece. :D

If you need visual references, or further explanation to any of the things I mentioned ping me back and I'll see what I can whip up in photo shop.

I'll add a bit more about the suspenders that I hope will be helpful. The problem is, they don't really follow the line of the boobs. The boobs will cause them to move a little less flatly. I used to have this issue all the time. I can't really think of any suspender items we have that you could reference but I would take a look at the buttons on some of the female blouses to guide you.

One hint I can think to give you, when it comes to clothing, lines are very seldom straight. Clothing has movement, and the lines will reflect this movement.

Thanks both of you :) Will take both of your tips onboard

I love the suspender skirt, so cute! Be sure to bug Cora if you need some feedback on shapes, shading, etc. I'd love to see more!