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Sagitar 08-06-2008 07:50 PM

what do you think I should add?
 
my avi looks a bit incomplete to me, the head and torso is fine but something about my bottom half bothers me.

Any suggestions?
I wouldn't mind if someone would do a dream avi for me.. :angel:

Winter Wind 08-06-2008 08:11 PM

Wow. o-o;

That's a lot of stuff to take in.
xD;

I have no idea what your theme is, I see purple, green, gold, white, black, and brown.
@[email protected]
Unless you're cosplaying...at least fit and use a theme? Then I'll be able to help you. ;D


I think, you're going for the black, brown, and gold effect. o-o
The sword REALLY throws it off, maybe try the Ra staff or something in the event commons?
Also, those shoes are a hugeeee no-no. The white is really random, and it somehow just doesn't blend in. o-o The shield is hecka random too, because the color is just so...different.
xD;

Maybe you're going for the elf fighter effect? ...if so, you need to still find things that match. xD;

Urboros 08-07-2008 02:22 AM

A chickie at you feet..

one of the easter items

Sagitar 08-07-2008 03:46 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Winter Wind (Post 3737244)
Wow. o-o;

That's a lot of stuff to take in.
xD;

I have no idea what your theme is, I see purple, green, gold, white, black, and brown.
@[email protected]
Unless you're cosplaying...at least fit and use a theme? Then I'll be able to help you. ;D


I think, you're going for the black, brown, and gold effect. o-o
The sword REALLY throws it off, maybe try the Ra staff or something in the event commons?
Also, those shoes are a hugeeee no-no. The white is really random, and it somehow just doesn't blend in. o-o The shield is hecka random too, because the color is just so...different.
xD;

Maybe you're going for the elf fighter effect? ...if so, you need to still find things that match. xD;

yeah I'm going to the fighter look.... that's why the sword with all it's purpleness.. >.<
I like everything else on myself but the shoes. they are a huge bother.

I'm not touching the head, that's for sure. xP
I also thought the golden pin and sash was okay with the shield.

Winter Wind 08-07-2008 04:42 AM

Fighter look...hmmm.

If you're going for the elf look, I'd suggest either the gold or black roman shoe thingies that are in the event commons. ;D THey'd work better than those shoes. @[email protected] And perhaps try those purple basic stockings to match the sword? @[email protected]

It kinda looks like you threw the avi together. Nothing matches, and it takes a while before the idea of "fighter" sinks in. ...at least in my case. xD;;
Soo...try balancing out the colors? ;D

I think the oak shield would seriously work better, that shield you have is just so glaringly out of place. xD;;; In terms of color.

-matching perfectionist- xD;;

Embella 08-07-2008 08:32 AM

Maybe like an animal or something?

cairnina 08-07-2008 08:32 AM

Aww, lots of colour.
Hmmm, could something green in the lower part help.

Kei 08-08-2008 07:22 PM

The concept is really nice
I'd say replacing the clothes with those of a more darker brown
And get boots instead of heels

Arisu 08-08-2008 07:35 PM

pretty avi, I think you need bown in the feet area.

Coquette 08-09-2008 03:53 AM

i don't know, but i think it needs brown...at the bottom :P

Akstar 08-09-2008 04:14 AM

Other than the foot wear that others had said, balance your purple might fix the odd color balance issue I am seeing.

Sagitar 08-09-2008 11:00 AM

well I changed my avatar almost completely. .. :roll:

Elwing 08-09-2008 01:20 PM

I see, it looks very good. One thing, there is too much brown
on the head, and the yellow butterfly pin is a bit too... yellow.
For the rest I think it looks very good.
Maybe change that head... thingy into a newyears pin, if you have one,
the colors would also match the blue of the harp.

Tonosamanjuu 08-09-2008 03:38 PM

Overall, I think it looks really nice. ♥

Maybe try adding a bit more of the dark brown to the bottom somehow? Leggings perhaps?

_~Link~_ 08-09-2008 06:51 PM

Try adding some blue to that empty space on the left side of your avi somehow.

8/10 its almost there, just needs a little somethin' somethin'.

Sagitar 08-09-2008 07:14 PM

leggings huh? I'll try to search for some good brown ones..

do you think the winter birds would be a good add of blue..?

`Haru 08-09-2008 08:07 PM

I agree with Link, blue on the left side of your avii and maybe a pair of brown boots to balance everything out ?

9|10
edit;; I think the birds would look really good! and you could use that to even out the lack of blue on the left side....

=D

Arisu 08-09-2008 08:26 PM

I like your avi how it is, I wouldn't add anythinkg. 9/10

Sagitar 08-10-2008 09:16 AM

thank you all for your answers ^^

I might try the birds, but I'm satisfied with my current avatar :)

thanks a lot <3


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