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Trapped in a glass box
watching you walk away not caring where i am or even what i am doing you fade away as i stay there taped crying i love you i thought you loved me but all you did was walk leaving me on the floor as the pain consumes me i do have more poems and i would love to hear some comments to make my poems better. other then the fact that my spelling isn't right because i know that already. |
come on people i want to know what you think pleeaaaaasssssssseeeeeeeeee read please *gets on hands and knees* pleas *puppy dog look* i just want to know
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I've merged your first two posts and deleted the spam in your third. Please if you want people to see your topic, add something in the title like "looking for critique' or post on topic "hey can someone give me some critique on this" don't post random nonsense. Thanks (:
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