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The Time Watch
I'm very very new to poetry, so I'm not even too sure if this goes here, but I'm going to give it a shot.
This poem/whatever it is, is based on a story of mine. So please, any feedback would be nice and any questions I'll answer as well as I can ^3^ The Time Watch I place this watch in your possession. Bind it, with this leather cord, about your neck and never forget This trinket puts you in an important Position. You now control time and space Only but twelve times over. Remember now that if you t'were to Loose it too soon, it would only Mean a quicker doom. I trust you with this clock as I was trusted with it. Now go, and, Like so many others, use your powers To save the world twelve times over again. I place the Time Watch in your possession. |
nice poem,Closet Shadow.
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Thanks, Medusa!
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Your welcome.
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cool poem,thats reminds of doctor who:hes a time-lord <3 if you dont know.
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That's an interesting poem, I can't seem to find its rhythm, though. >.<
In the second stanza, did you mean 'loose' as in "His tie was too loose." or did you perhaps mean to type 'lose' as in "Don't lose your homework, or you'll get a bad grade." ? Sort of confuzzled me. o.o Nice work, though, I like it lots. ^^ |
Doomstar,
Thanks! I know who the doctor is! I love him, he's so funny ^3^ Kidalanna, Like I said, I didn't know much about poetry when I wrote this ^^;; And yes I meant like "lose your homework". Sometimes English confuses me >.< |
Don't worry about that English still confuses me. I don't know why but other laguages jest make more sense.
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