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amberboo1016 05-17-2009 08:00 PM

This is a poem I did on Mother's Day!
 
Mother...
You filled my days with rainbow lights,
Fairytales and sweet dream nights,
A kiss to wipe away my tears,
Gingerbread to ease my fears.
You gave the gift of life to me
And then in love, you set me free.
I thank you for your tender care,
For deep warm hugs and being there.
I hope that when you think of me
A part of you
You'll always see.

clow_sakura 05-27-2009 07:46 PM

It's a very lovely poem but i think it is a little incomplete, why don't u add a few more lines to it?

Trippytronix 06-14-2009 06:42 PM

Ooh, that' s a real good poem. Better than I could ever do xD It sounds complete to me, it tells a short story of him/her growing up.

ninjania 08-18-2009 03:00 PM

awww thats so beautiful you did a wonderful job


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