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This is a poem I did on Mother's Day!
Mother...
You filled my days with rainbow lights, Fairytales and sweet dream nights, A kiss to wipe away my tears, Gingerbread to ease my fears. You gave the gift of life to me And then in love, you set me free. I thank you for your tender care, For deep warm hugs and being there. I hope that when you think of me A part of you You'll always see. |
It's a very lovely poem but i think it is a little incomplete, why don't u add a few more lines to it?
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Ooh, that' s a real good poem. Better than I could ever do xD It sounds complete to me, it tells a short story of him/her growing up.
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awww thats so beautiful you did a wonderful job
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