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ClockReject 08-01-2009 04:29 PM

Poem. [Perfect Bliss]
 
Perfect Bliss

You caught a glimpse of her, and you knew that was her.
She became that pretty face you longed for, for so long.
You held out your arms, wearing your heart on your sleeve.
She walked right into them, welcoming that warm safe feeling.
You hold onto her, and gently kiss her lips in perfect bliss.
Yet, you have no idea what is going on, within that beautiful soul.
She knows of pain, of shattered hearts.
You opened her heart, to a whole new world
a whole new kind of love.

For you, she fights to live in the moment.
She fights against, everything she’s known.
Her body shakes underneath your arms,
she doesn’t know how to let go of old pain,
that aches through her veins.
You look at her with loving and caring eyes.
She looks beyond that, she searches into the depths of your soul.
Where, she finds a surprisingly new feeling.
She finds a burning flame of undying love.
You’ve comforted her, stroking her hair,
and caressing her soft face.
You both know that, the future could bring anything,
its a scary thought, and feeling, but again
with open arms, you both welcome it with pleasure,
knowing that as long as you have each other,
nothing else will ever matter.


sadrain 08-04-2009 01:30 AM

Awww, what a nice, sweet poem. <3 ^^

Kat Dakuu 08-04-2009 07:08 AM

It reminds me a lot of two characters I have. This poem has such a 'feel good' vibe to it. Makes you want to smile

princessdoc 08-04-2009 04:18 PM

I like thispoem. it's really good.

ClockReject 08-04-2009 08:57 PM

Thanks ^-^
It's one of my older ones.
It takes awhile for me to
produce something as
good as this.

kodoku 08-05-2009 03:39 AM

I love this poem, :3. It's so sweet!

xStringsx 08-19-2009 05:25 AM

<3

darkestdemon 08-19-2009 06:30 AM

aww your poem is so sweet i wish i could wright poems the good

ClockReject 08-19-2009 06:57 AM

[@Darkest]
Thanks, It takes time, trust me.
I only produce good poems like
that every once in awhile.

Angel_Kitty 08-19-2009 09:56 PM

inspiration really must hit you to write a good poem. sometimes i just wake up and lie in bed forming a poem in my head, then i go and write it down real quick so i don't forget it. i myself have written several good poems. by the way, where can i post my work?

ClockReject 08-19-2009 10:29 PM

I'm exactly the same way, but sometimes I end up forgetting them [Sad]
Uhm, depending on what you have but you can try here. (:


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