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Kat Dakuu 08-04-2009 07:43 AM

Love Posion
 
okay, so I don't usually post my poems in places like this, but here goes...

Love poison
Like thorns and poison moving through,
Deep into my veins I'm taking you.
Green leaves twisting off
of curled, ropey forms.
Its like love inside of this wondrous storm.
In golden, misted eyes
all is seen,
And stepled churches reaching up
to brightly painted skies.
I see you in each and all;
Strain my ears, if only to hear your call.
Would each silver kiss,
Or golden flowing river boiling in my soul
Last forever?
Be the fire fierce that gently feeds
Till I am all I was meant to be.
Gossamer, silky threads that drape
over each still arm of mine
Are still yet chains on me.
You are like thorns and poison moving through
But can I break away from you?

Codette 08-07-2009 07:43 PM

Thats really cool. I love the mixed symbols, and the return to the poison thorns. You really get this image of someone fighting against all odds to keep their love, but the lover seems to turn away, poisoning them.
I probably got the idea all wrong, but it is a beautiful poem!

soulwaste 08-07-2009 10:44 PM

thats awesome, You should be proud to have created that poem. :D

Kat Dakuu 08-09-2009 05:52 AM

thanks alot. I have honestly no idea what my poem is about, I just started into space and saw a bunch of vines and started writting. lol!

||_HXC_|| 08-09-2009 04:26 PM

That's really pretty Kat. Better than any of mine >.>

Kat Dakuu 08-09-2009 08:00 PM

Demon

The demon in he has awakened,
A monster inside and out.
Blood rushing, pushing me forward
as reality slips away.
The demon, it has killed;
killed me, killed everyone.
As I sit in this dark cell
I realize that the demon is only me.
I am the one who held the gun,
the one who stole their lives
and in the end lost my own.
In that dark cell, I know the demon won.

Kat Dakuu 08-17-2009 03:34 AM

Pensive words

I don't want this moment to ever pass
in this space where there is no time.
Underneath this starry sky
without a thought,
or a coming future;
Just this moment
Lasting forever.

We're rushing, rushing
In a world where future is
more important than the present.
I want to stop in one moment
and just lay and dream;
And maybe my dreams will come true!
I won't have to rush
becuase there will be that moment
when everything stills
and the future no longer exists.

Kat Dakuu 11-13-2009 06:23 AM

I kinda abandoned this thread, but I will post some more stuff now.

No Love
falling falling, its not love.
cherry blossoms and hidden signs;
nothing here speaks of love.
Falling down, can't get up;
this is nothing but your binds.
I see you pushed me,
I see me fall.
Past cherry blossoms, roses, thorns,
into darkness, past it all.
Falling falling, I know now,
signs not hidden, open shores
and boats that sail.
because nothing here,
no, nothing speaks of love.


Abuse
Bruised and battered, my soul is tattered,
though hidden for none to see
because scrapped knees and broken seams
do not matter in this game.
That is why I sit and cry
in darkness all alone,
because bruised and battered
does not matter
in this game to you and me.


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