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Love Posion
okay, so I don't usually post my poems in places like this, but here goes...
Love poison Like thorns and poison moving through, Deep into my veins I'm taking you. Green leaves twisting off of curled, ropey forms. Its like love inside of this wondrous storm. In golden, misted eyes all is seen, And stepled churches reaching up to brightly painted skies. I see you in each and all; Strain my ears, if only to hear your call. Would each silver kiss, Or golden flowing river boiling in my soul Last forever? Be the fire fierce that gently feeds Till I am all I was meant to be. Gossamer, silky threads that drape over each still arm of mine Are still yet chains on me. You are like thorns and poison moving through But can I break away from you? |
Thats really cool. I love the mixed symbols, and the return to the poison thorns. You really get this image of someone fighting against all odds to keep their love, but the lover seems to turn away, poisoning them.
I probably got the idea all wrong, but it is a beautiful poem! |
thats awesome, You should be proud to have created that poem. :D
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thanks alot. I have honestly no idea what my poem is about, I just started into space and saw a bunch of vines and started writting. lol!
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That's really pretty Kat. Better than any of mine >.>
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Demon
The demon in he has awakened, A monster inside and out. Blood rushing, pushing me forward as reality slips away. The demon, it has killed; killed me, killed everyone. As I sit in this dark cell I realize that the demon is only me. I am the one who held the gun, the one who stole their lives and in the end lost my own. In that dark cell, I know the demon won. |
Pensive words
I don't want this moment to ever pass in this space where there is no time. Underneath this starry sky without a thought, or a coming future; Just this moment Lasting forever. We're rushing, rushing In a world where future is more important than the present. I want to stop in one moment and just lay and dream; And maybe my dreams will come true! I won't have to rush becuase there will be that moment when everything stills and the future no longer exists. |
I kinda abandoned this thread, but I will post some more stuff now.
No Love falling falling, its not love. cherry blossoms and hidden signs; nothing here speaks of love. Falling down, can't get up; this is nothing but your binds. I see you pushed me, I see me fall. Past cherry blossoms, roses, thorns, into darkness, past it all. Falling falling, I know now, signs not hidden, open shores and boats that sail. because nothing here, no, nothing speaks of love. Abuse Bruised and battered, my soul is tattered, though hidden for none to see because scrapped knees and broken seams do not matter in this game. That is why I sit and cry in darkness all alone, because bruised and battered does not matter in this game to you and me. |
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