Broken Doll and others
 

Instead of giving a really long introduction or anything I'm just going to post this poem. I would really like some feed back. Thank you so much for any feedback that you can give or for even taking your time to look at this!
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I awoke with a start, not knowing were I was and these words still ringing in my head. The haunted me, and messed with me until I finally broke. I wrote them down and sighed with relief when the torment was no more, only to awake the next and find I would have to endure more.

That's when I realized that this was ~A Nightmare for all~


This hurtful knife
Been stabbed again
Twisted to my broken heart
Watch it bleeding like a waterfall
For I am your broken doll
Hurtful words been said in spite
Despite the pleasing I try to give
The verbal beatings that I take
For I am still you broken doll
Twisted tortured little thing
I’m still your broken doll
For I’m still your broken doll.