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Broken Doll and others
Instead of giving a really long introduction or anything I'm just going to post this poem. I would really like some feed back. Thank you so much for any feedback that you can give or for even taking your time to look at this!
---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Broken Doll I awoke with a start, not knowing were I was and these words still ringing in my head. The haunted me, and messed with me until I finally broke. I wrote them down and sighed with relief when the torment was no more, only to awake the next and find I would have to endure more. That's when I realized that this was ~A Nightmare for all~ This hurtful knife Been stabbed again Twisted to my broken heart Watch it bleeding like a waterfall For I am your broken doll Hurtful words been said in spite Despite the pleasing I try to give The verbal beatings that I take For I am still you broken doll Twisted tortured little thing I’m still your broken doll For I’m still your broken doll. |
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