Ethileens Short Stories,Poems and Songs ^^!
 

Hello, this is my first thread here so, Im a little excited,scared x3. Ive always liked to make my own version of a song, or, take my time to come up with my own. Sadly, I lossed all my original songs about two years ago, and cannot remember their lyrics. But, I love to remix romantic songs about being cheated on from behind, but still being in love >E.x. Bad Boy, Cascada<, I can create it into a complete love song, but, sometimes, I have to say, it comes out terrible XD. So, im posting these things up to see others thoughts of them. You can tell me if you love them or hate them, as long as your being honest, and, hey, you can give me some pointers to help me make them better ^^.
So far, Ive only remixed three songs. Bad Boy, Cascada, Miracle,Cascada. And, I made a depressing version of Beyonce's Halo. I personally think all three turned out quite good. I made only one original song, called Free. Its quite a depressing song too, but, funny and oddly, the song *The One*, theme for Call of Duty's World at War, Nazi Zombies, gave me the idea. My boyfriend said it was really depressing, but, awesome. *Feels special x3*.

Anyway, I also love making Poems, but, their not always rhymmy ones. I sometimes make some about life, and, some about candy<adorble comedic ones x3.< Some about magic and some about family. But, im still trying with poems, some dont turn out as great as I plan xD. Ive made noe, but, its a bit odd. I think its interesting though. I write it two years back and have it hanging on my wall XD.

As for short stories, I love to make them. Mainly, their based off of anime and take place in high school or magical girl fairytale things. Their not awesome, but, some turn out okay. I dont have any yet, but, I can brainstorm ^^!

So, I hope you enjoy what I post here, Id love for you to comment =D

1. My remixed version of Cascada - Bad Boy <REAL song!<

Remember the feeling, Remember the day?
My stone heart was breaking,
My love was bloomin'.
That moment I became someone else,
My heart came and I saw you...

Be my Bad Boy, Be my bad boy,
Be my weekend lover, be my special friend,
Be my bad boy, but understand,
Ill always need you in my life again.

Please be my bad boy, be my man,
Be my weekened lover, be my special friend,
Oh, be my bad boy,
but understand, Ill always need you in my life again..
Yes, I'll always need you again.

Bad boy!

You kept your promise, and stood by my side,
But all my friends just pushed me aside.
You always beleived I was strong,
Now you made it so I can go on.

Please be my bad boy, be my man,
Be my weekened lover, be my special friend,
Oh, be my bad boy,
but understand, Ill always need you in my life again.
Please be my bad boy, be my man,
Be my weekened lover, be my special friend,
Oh, be my bad boy,
but understand, Ill always need you in my life again.

I enqurage you to listen to the original Bad Boy, so you know the beat and the real lyrics so you can compare my lyrics to theirs, and see if it fits. >> This was for my boyfriend X3. He loved it ^^ <<