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L y k e 0 m g 08-12-2009 02:41 AM

Crtitique my art please
 
OK, so I made these avi art for my friends on Gaia. Yes I know, they need to improve.:headdesk: I get fristrated sometimes and don't feel to draw as much. :sweat:

http://img30.imageshack.us/img30/447/281xx1v.png
This is my latest I made for a friend.


http://img232.imageshack.us/img232/8...elykecopyb.png
This one I made for myself.

http://img44.imageshack.us/img44/1871/spidehartcopy.png
This headshot I made for another friend...I felt bad because I think the head looks funny, same with her face hahaha. But she loved it anyway.:mrgreen:


PicassoMoon 08-12-2009 02:58 AM

I love the shadowing and highlights :) Good job!

ainebella 08-12-2009 03:25 AM

wonderful job on the highlighting and shadowing!!!!! i loved them and was very impressed

Flowery Pit 08-12-2009 07:24 AM

You're very good with shading and highlights, also nice texture effect. Here's some helpful critique; the heads are very shapless, you should try looking at various of objects around your house like a bottle and try forming a head outta it. It'll help, since that's how I create head structures. I hope that helps. :)

Misha_Heart 08-12-2009 12:53 PM

Very cute.

L y k e 0 m g 08-14-2009 04:43 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Flowery Pit (Post 1764831017)
You're very good with shading and highlights, also nice texture effect. Here's some helpful critique; the heads are very shapless, you should try looking at various of objects around your house like a bottle and try forming a head outta it. It'll help, since that's how I create head structures. I hope that helps. :)

Thanks everyone. :) Sorry for the late reply, I'm new to this site and couldn't find my posts.....XD But yeah thanks a lot.

Hmm, I should try that...I always have trouble with the faces. And I need to learn how to express the faces too. :cry:

Bunbun_chompper 08-14-2009 07:22 AM

a little more detail wouldnt hurt at all.

EMYLYAKOS 08-14-2009 08:14 AM

I like them all. You seem talented.

Raviel Jurojin 08-14-2009 08:32 AM

very nice pictures

Miao's 08-19-2009 04:04 AM

eeehhh that's really nice!! =D
as the others said, i love how you did the shadow and the highlights stuff! ^-^


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