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I Wrote a dark little poem :)
Out over the horizon, clouds rolling in.
The time for Storm has come again. Darkened clouds, the day transforms. The darkness comes as the lightening forms. The wind, it blows clouds that banish mirth as the rain falls and touches the earth. A figure stands, still as stone, a gentle soul but still alone. His soul is one with the storm at hand He calls his friend upon the land. The thunder rolls, the lightening strikes, the light arcs out like poisoned spikes. The rain nurtures the earth below The lightening is swift and sure as an arrow. Thunder scares the children inside as they wait indoors for the storm to subside. The gentle rumble, the draft at night, The constant, effective, flashing light, The fall of the rain upon the roof, All of these calming sounds aloof Help to rock minds to rest. With calming dreams abreast. It storms through the day, into the night The sun above is below, no longer bright. The rain still falls, now say good-bye as they fall asleep to their lullaby. Comment and lemme know how I did! <3 |
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Oooh, I really like it! Especially "A figure stands, still as stone,
a gentle soul but still alone.". xoxo |
I quite liked it! I wish I could give some good feedback, but I've never been very good with poetry. My apologies.
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Other than that I thought it was very good. However, next time you want to post poetry, there is a little poetry sub-form just for poetry-lovers like you! |
its very good!!! would u mind if i use 2-3 lines in my orkut and facebook profiles??? the last 2 lines are very good!!! awesome poem!!! what do you call it???
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I thought that was a rather nice poem. ^_^ Makes me want to put some of my own up here.
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cool. ^^ thats really good. :)
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