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az_stars 08-18-2009 02:09 PM

Constructive criticism needed on my first base :]
 
After I've discovered Menewsha, and promptly become hooked, I decided to try making some bases for pixel dolls. So here are my efforts:

http://fc08.deviantart.com/fs48/f/20..._by_asrahi.png

I still have to do some minor edits (like the white dots on the darker flavored bases). But what do you think? :D

Novariko 08-18-2009 02:17 PM

It looks very good especially the Atlantian one, it reminds me of those Zora from the Legend of Zelda :D
I like the style of it, its really nice.
The only thing I would comment on is her hand, it could be fine the way it is but maybe if you added actual fingers to it it may look better.
But overall I would deffinitly use this base =3

az_stars 08-18-2009 06:10 PM

@Novariko: Thank you :D
Yeah, I haven't really looked at the hands yet. I just made a rough shape for them and kinda...forgot about them XD. I'll work on them :)

colorful set 08-18-2009 09:34 PM

I like them! The skin tones are all really nice. I do think that the hands could use some more detail/shape haha.

Is this just for a pixel doll base? I think it would be great as like an avatar like the Menewsha bases! I love how you changed the eyes for the last one! So cute.

Novariko 08-19-2009 02:32 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by az_stars (Post 1764934112)
@Novariko: Thank you :D
Yeah, I haven't really looked at the hands yet. I just made a rough shape for them and kinda...forgot about them XD. I'll work on them :)

Hehe good to know, hope we can see more updates, this base looks really cute and I wanna use it!! lol
Especially the Atlantian one =3


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