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Little Miss 08-19-2009 03:39 AM

Poems, what are they? (a poem of mine)
 
Poem i wrote:

Poems are just the funniest things,
They’re like stories with fancy, magical wings.
They can make you feel happy or make you cry,
They can make you feel worried or make you sigh.
Poems are masterpieces, music, beauty and galore,
Filled with laughter, enjoyment and so much more.
They’re carefully chosen and tied so tight,
That the letters stand out as you write.
They’re a beautiful song, they sing like birds,
And yet, they are only words.

:D Like it?

Hayzel 09-05-2009 06:44 PM

Amazing. My ONLY comment is that the syllables are a little off beat which makes keeping a rhythm when reading a little difficult. *applause* but the rest is truly amazing.

Little Miss 09-13-2009 08:32 PM

Thanks, technically I made it a year ago. It's been sitting on a computer file, waiting for me to open it ^^


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