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Some Crit, please.
Alright, so recently I feel like my art needs some help; but then again this might be all because I've started to try and draw guys. I don't know which is which, but all I do know is now I need some help in what people think of it. So here's some examples which both links go to my current dA, but they aren't as recent as I would like...I just don't like to CG alot.
http://gummykit.deviantart.com/art/C...Cook-129419841 http://gummykit.deviantart.com/art/I...-you-132876486 |
I like your style, but your anatomy could use a little work. For example, in the first piece, the legs are a bit too short, as well as the arms. The second one looks pretty, but the coloring does leave something to be desired.
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you have some very neat lines. however, i'm going to have to agree that your anatomy needs a little work. in the first piece, the legs and feet are a bit strange, and the feet themselves are bent a little far upwards. keep practicing, you are off to a nice start.
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What impressive pieces! The lines are so smooth... I'm a little envious. XD But like those before me said, your anatomy needs a lot of work.
For the first piece, the arms are at two different lengths and the legs might be too short... also the angle of the feet look odd to me. Also you should be careful of how you draw elbows, it looks slanted. The angle of her head also looks a little weird, it might be that the eye that is fartherest away might be too thinned out for the angle. For the second picture, this one looks a lot better. However, the woman's waist looks too short. The length of her head also looks a lot bigger than her whole body or maybe it looks like that because of the illusion of the drawing. The other person looks wonderful, but I think the head looks a little disproportioned in that angle. I really like your coloring, but you should be careful of how you color some things. First picture, what bright colors! A nice warm color theme. But what bothered me are how you colored her ears. The shape looks so flat even though you shaded in it. Also the hair also looks a little flat, maybe make the hair more loosened, such as make the strands look more realistic. The second one looks kind of rushed, there is so much potential that you can do with this piece! DX I have to say that your outfit design is out of this world! I absolutly love it! Keep up the good work and also try to practice with your anatomy. |
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