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some art for a comic i'm working on.
this is for a comic i'm working on called xabat noble.
i'd appreciate any feedback! thanks! http://fc05.deviantart.com/fs46/f/20...milyenigma.png i'm on dA- emilyenigma.deviantart.com |
I think you have a neat style, though the nose is a little pugged for my tastes. :lol:
The glasses you drew in looks a little slapped on, possibly because of the flat colours, but the size doesn't seem right. The right frame looks smaller than it should be, even in that perspective. Perhaps you could make the frame there a little thicker? What is the comic about? =D |
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the comic is about a group of kids who are wrongfully sent away to a school for teens with rare disabilities. i'm still roughing out plot details, but i should be starting soon. C: |
I love the style for the eyes and lips! The glasses look a bit messy, a bit large and just a tad wobble when being drawn
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nice a lil shine in the hair would b nice as well as some skin color and a few decorations other than that <3 it ^-^ as well as ur style O.O*gives thumbs up*
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