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Midnight, Twilight
I don't know if you would consider this a poem, I think of it more as a short song. Please tell me what you think I can do to improve it and what you like about it. :D
Midnight dawns Life is pure, Twilight calls Yet again, Night is falling Rapidly, Where am I Where are you? |
Lyrics to songs are poetry. Nicely done for such a short bit. My only comment is that you should probably remain consistent with the comma placement. Well done.
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Thanks, I'll do that =3
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