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Poisonus 09-05-2009 09:28 PM

Poisonous Poetry
 
I am bound

For I can't see the moon,
I can't see the room,
All I see is White

I am trapped

For my mind is spinning,
No thought's occurring,
My eye's are blank

I am captured

For my hands are shaking,
My world is breaking,
The floors are damp

I am killed

For my eye's are closing,
My pain is ebbing,
All I see is White.
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No one said it was easy,
But who said it would be hard?
I need you beside me,
Because you and I can't be apart.

But Im wandering in circles,
I can't find the words in my mind,
Nor can I find them hidden in my heart,
These new worlds are vile, not kind.

In need of serenity,
It always evades my grasp,
Because when Im with you,
Those moments seem to pass

They said it'd be easy,
They said it'd be hard,
When I tried to tell you,
What's in my heart.
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Aren't parent's supposed to love their children?
Aren't children supposed to love their parents?
Then why do I feel nothing but hate for my mother,
Because her chest holds a heart withered black?

I don't like this feeling of contempt,
But I can't help but produce it,
For her actions leave me with thoughts,
Most that would curdle your blood brown.

Some nights I stand awake in the kitchen,
A knife like a butchers in my grasp,
The blade shivering over my skin,
Itching to cut and draw fresh blood.

But I can never go through with it,
And gingerly placing the knife in its place,
I walk up the stairs and retire to bed,
To mentally prepare for another onslaught tomorrow.

Do I wish to live this way? No.
But do I have a choice? Of course.
Never has it ever slipped my mind,
But I am to weak to go through with it.

So I now live my life as a lie,
A mask of happiness in place of pain,
Becoming the 'friend' who others share pain with,
While I hold my own deep within.

Poisonus 09-05-2009 09:35 PM

Lost
 
The chain's are rusted,
the lock broken,
the door is open,
but I am lost

The Earth is still,
But I am shaking,
My mind is Breaking,
My words are lost

I try to yell,
But no one can hear me,
No one can see me,
For Life is lost

Lungs are Screaming,
My world is Spinning,
My end's Beginning,

For I have lost.
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Under the sheet's a battle raged,
While above the world was still,
A violent battle of dreams,
One that can soothe, or kill.

Eye's opening took such time,
Waking up never was such a chore,
Drenched in sweat and shivering cold,
Wishing for a dream that was just a bore.

They kept raging, one after another,
Boredom was not meant to be,
For the demons haunt those who are weak,
Slowly driving them into insanity.

How absently I move,
Is this what it feels like to be dead?
Will this happen to me,
Every time I go to bed?

I can't take these feelings,
I must let them out,
Before my world comes crashing down,
For I soon will be unable to move about.

So here I stand at the edge,
The water's roar beneath me,
So I close my eyes, and take a step,
Though I am flying, I can no longer be.

I've felt peace, and calm,
For what feels the first time of my life,
I can open my eyes, though I see no light,
I feel soothed, now forever free of strife.
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The trees have hands,
Evil things they have planned,
Beware if you go out,
For another Hallows Eve has come about.

The shadows you see aren't dreams,
And neither are the ghostly screams.
Beware of the black cat,
For it means a night of combat.

Around the corner,
Lies another horror.
One that shifts into shapes
Never allowing you to escape.

Avoid that shortcut home,
For in that graveyard you're not alone,
The ground moving is not a trick,
And though a hand breaks through, don't panic.

Beware the evils of the night,
But don't stay inside in fright,
Keep to groups, and don't stay long,
For you may not live to see the dawn

Knerd 09-05-2009 10:24 PM

Hey Poisonus, I've merged your two Poetry threads together.

From now on, just remember to post your new pieces in this topic. :yes:

Poisonus 09-05-2009 10:47 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Knerd (Post 1765032291)
Hey Poisonus, I've merged your two Poetry threads together.

From now on, just remember to post your new pieces in this topic. :yes:

Oh, thanks! :D

Still getting the hang of this stuff... <.< :sweat:

Hayzel 09-06-2009 12:05 AM

Concrit From the Movement
 
Nice job on the two poems. The only thing I would say is in this particular line...

Quote:

But none can hear me,
You may want to reword that line because it seems a little choppy in there with everything else. Otherwise, well done. *claps*

ErudaXhienz 09-11-2009 01:59 PM

nice poems though.. keep up! :)
i love the first one^^ well done!


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