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Kikibug360 09-23-2009 12:52 AM

[[Should I keep going?]]
 
I frowned up at the dark sky. Where the hell was Darien? He should have been here two hours ago! I made a noise to alert the air I was mas. "I sware to God if he doesn't walk up in a minute, I'm going to kill him." I growled to no one in particular. I layed back in the grass. Currently, I was in Mrs. Bance's field. This is where me and Darien always met so we could be together. But lately, he hasn't been showing up, which obviously made me rather angry.

Then, I heard footsteps. 'Finally!' I thought. I sat up and made a face at Darien's dark figure. I made my green, slitted eyes stare into his wide, blue ones. He looked guilty, which he was, when he came up to me. "Where the hell have you been?! I've been waiting here for two freaking hours, Darien!" I know I sounded sort of bratty, but you would, too, if you had been waiting since six a.m.!

He gave me a tiny smile and sat down next to me. "Sorry, Kae. I had to help Mom with Nana." he said quietly. All the anger totally and completely vanished from my body. You see, Darien's 'Nana' is his grandmother who is struggling with breast cancer. Darien's very, very close to her and she's all he has left...well, besides his mom, but she's a complete you-know-what and basically disowned him in the eight grade.

I wrapped my arms around him. "Oh, Darien." I inhaled his scent and closed my eyes. I nuzzled my head against his chest and he ran a hand through my golden blonde hair. "If she passes, I'll be here for you." I murmered and he chuckled softly. His chest rumbled and I couldn't help but smile when I heard it.

"Kaelee, you don't need to comfort me. I'm fine." he said in a happier tone. I shrugged and wiggled myself closer to him.
"Whatever. I'm comforting you anyways. And besides, I know what'll make you in a perfect mood."
"Oh really, now? And what would that be?"
I pulled away from him and smirked. "Oh, I'll show you."

He raised a brow and I leaned forward a bit. My lips were an inch away from his. And he knew I was going to tease him just a bit. And, like always, he was right. I kissed the corner of his mouth, down his jaw, his nose, his neck, and then back up. And when I heard him grunt, I finally kissed his lips.

I melted. His lips were always so soft and warm. I wrapped my arms around his neck and he wrapped his around my waist. I pressed myself closer to him and he fell backwards. I laughed softly as I straddled him. "Gotcha." I whispered seductively. But then I felt his hands on the sides of my arms and suddenly he was on top of me.
"Actually, it is I that has got you."

I giggled and just as we were about to start kissing again, his phone rang. 'Damn! And right when we were getting to the good part!' I could tell in his eyes he had the excact same thoughts. He sat down and answered it as I laid my head in his lap.

"Hello? ...no, I'm still at the store, actually. ...what kind of medicine? ...well, did you call 9-11? ...Crystal, how- ok, sorry, mom. ...ok, I'll be home soon." he grumbled. He hung up and gave me a 'sorry-but-I-have-to-go-help-that-evil-with-I-call-a-mother' look. I sighed and kissed him quickly on his lips before he ran away. I sat there, alone.

"I love you." I whispered to the wind, but I knew he didn't hear.

chronic casey 09-24-2009 08:42 PM

it is almost definate that you HAVE to finish this. go through with it and be happy :]

TheNavyBlueMoon 09-25-2009 11:45 PM

ooh, finish this! its really good so far! <3 i do that to myself all the time, i'll start writing something, and then i'll convince my self that i shouldnt continue, and then i lose the paper, so when i want to continue, its gone. :'C i did that recently, only this time it was an accident that i lost it. i want to re-write it, but it was so perfect! i wont be able to do it that well again...

MrJetta 09-26-2009 05:58 PM

It's actually a very interesting piece of work. I would definitely finish it if I were you. I'm waiting for the next installment of this story!!


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