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HoshiKerushii 09-26-2009 02:33 PM

judge my art :)
 
http://i476.photobucket.com/albums/r...n713/00072.jpg

crypticshadowspell 09-26-2009 05:21 PM

You're really good at drawing, this is a beautiful piece!

RAWRz 09-26-2009 08:07 PM

*o* I love her face, though, her legs seem a little awkward. The right leg looks like it needs to be out father, then being to close to the left.

Just a tip, sorry for my bad English. -_-

Suona 09-26-2009 08:09 PM

Thats really quite good :)

Only thing I would suggest changing is the nose. It takes away from the look of the face and ruins the otherwise good look you have going on.

Also, the arms are far too thin. Perhaps try to make them thicker.

Sally Sinema 09-27-2009 04:23 AM

Hoshi, that's beautiful! I love archery, so it is right up my alley ;)

fuyumi_saito 09-28-2009 05:18 PM

when I saw it I literally gasped, it's very very beautiful. I wish I could draw like you. What's your secret for drawing such proportionate bodies?

Kojirou 09-28-2009 06:40 PM

beautiful work of art

ThePsychoSheep 09-28-2009 09:32 PM

Well the arms compared to her body look a little thin....put some meat into that girl =D.Otherwise I really like the colouring :).Good job

TaterBuggy 10-25-2009 10:13 PM

That is so AWESOME! i wish that i could draw like that! :)

Malty 11-02-2009 09:15 PM

It has nice flow (lines aren't all stiff and angled) but the face seams a little off to me. I think its the kind of mouth you draw, to me it lacks depth. I don't draw manga style so I don't have much room to talk, It's good though.

macchan 11-03-2009 08:32 PM

Oooo I quite like this. Despite what some are saying I really like the thickness of the arms, true they seem very thin but for some reason it seems to suit her. The neck however seems a bit off... probably get stoned but perhaps that is to thick? Or something... sorry I'm not much help.^^;

Serita 11-04-2009 04:01 AM

WOW that is really Beautiful. I love drawing. But I wish my drawings would turn out like that when i draw people.

WhiteSerenade 11-08-2009 01:01 AM

I love it! That's because it reminds me of a book I'm obsessed with. The Hunger Games. She reminds me of Katniss just with a little shorter hair.

mwahhaha 11-13-2009 07:08 PM

This is very nice. I really like the face, especially the eyes. The arms seem a little too thin, though. I'd beef up the upper arms. I'm not saying make her obese or to give her rippling muscles, but it's looks like it's the same thickness as the lower part of her arm.

Nightninja456 11-14-2009 12:15 AM

this is really good!its..like..real anime!!! :D


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